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Published: 2017-07-05 22:42:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 528; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 0
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Description I wanted to try drawing more the in the TF2 Comic artstyle.

Pls tell me how I did
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Comments: 8

VANlTA [2017-07-06 00:59:53 +0000 UTC]

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I like how angular the shoulders and face are drawn, and how well it contrasts against the smoother lineart of the gloves, glasses, eyes and so on.
I have some suggestions such as the hands, which are too small compared to the rest of the body. I also suggest that you add more defining shadows to the clothes, neck, etc. It would make the colors and lineart pop out! Also, you could try experiment with different thicknesses for the lineart, which can add more bold features.
Consider where the wrinkles would be placed on his coat and reflection from the light on his eyes and glasses. And dont be afraid to experiment with different colors of shadows too!

TLDR: Consider different colors for shadows and dont forget to highlight parts of his body and clothes to create an impactful boldness which will work well with this style!

I hope this was helpful ;;A;;

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ShivLaShiv [2017-07-06 00:21:21 +0000 UTC]

This looks AWESOME! I agree with the person who said his hand looks a little small, and the lines on his face might be a bit too harsh but that is more a matter of style! Keep up the good work  

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NeoNilo In reply to ShivLaShiv [2017-07-06 00:39:27 +0000 UTC]

ayyy thank you!

I'll be sure to do more TF2 soon

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ShivLaShiv In reply to NeoNilo [2017-07-06 00:40:14 +0000 UTC]

sweet!!!

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AntiRadiate [2017-07-05 23:39:31 +0000 UTC]

Its really good, i love it!!
But one thing you can improve are the hands, they are a bit to small.
I'm not trying to be mean sorry ;w;

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NeoNilo In reply to AntiRadiate [2017-07-05 23:48:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

And yeah, the hands did look a bit off while I was sketching them. (I just thought it was my inability to draw good hands, not the size XD)

But no its fine! I love critiques.

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L00M1N4UGH7Y [2017-07-05 23:09:27 +0000 UTC]

I love it aaaa

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NeoNilo In reply to L00M1N4UGH7Y [2017-07-05 23:10:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank yooooou

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