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Published: 2010-07-31 01:36:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 600; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 3
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I can't hate her for being
     everything I always wasn't
because
          you
were the one who kept telling me
     I could be someone better
when all you ever wanted
     was for me to turn into
          her.
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neonsquiggle - re: immovable objects and unstoppable forces
Comments: 12

volleyball-freeak [2010-09-02 01:29:38 +0000 UTC]

very "right to the point"

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neonsquiggle In reply to volleyball-freeak [2010-09-02 06:05:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. (: I tried to make it that way.

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kallia-goldenwings [2010-07-31 07:09:30 +0000 UTC]

that is just sad

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neonsquiggle In reply to kallia-goldenwings [2010-07-31 07:25:40 +0000 UTC]

It's meant to be, thank you. (:

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sarah-is-nameless [2010-07-31 04:46:08 +0000 UTC]

this is really good

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neonsquiggle In reply to sarah-is-nameless [2010-07-31 04:58:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! (:

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londonrey [2010-07-31 04:17:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow.
I like how this one seems to wind itself to the ending..
It.. its.. yeah. I really like how raw it is and how easy to relate to it is.. just.. ohohohoh.

It makes me want to cry, a bit.

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neonsquiggle In reply to londonrey [2010-07-31 04:57:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! It's a pretty painful topic for me, which is why it was easy to write about, if that makes sense. (:
I hope it doesn't depress you too much. D:

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londonrey In reply to neonsquiggle [2010-07-31 05:07:55 +0000 UTC]

You're so welcome! And that makes a lot of sense because that's how it is for me too. It didn't depress me too much, it's good to know that someone understands. (:

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neonsquiggle In reply to londonrey [2010-07-31 05:33:02 +0000 UTC]

I guess writing comes easily to those who are pained. Yay. (: You're not alone.

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londonrey In reply to neonsquiggle [2010-07-31 13:59:22 +0000 UTC]

That's right! The typical tortured soul poet. I'm alright with being that. ^_^

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neonsquiggle In reply to londonrey [2010-08-01 00:16:29 +0000 UTC]

Though your writing's far from typical. (: Good job accepting it though; I know I haven't. XD

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