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Nephilym In reply to mizz-izzy [2010-06-30 14:05:44 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for all the compliments! Yes I really do need to work on the shadows, I kinda avoided them because I figured I'd mess them up, plus I'm a little lazy! Thank you for the link I'll have to give that a try!
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Sun-like-Rain [2010-06-29 18:48:37 +0000 UTC]
XD i don't know what i'm doing, but i've been where you are, and i'd like to critique this first of all, you're really ahead of your game so don't think you're bad XD, i love your textures, and i'm proud of you for working with transparency this early ^o^ your background is awfully purty and this really is nice :] so onto tips. (y'don't have to take any XD this is just geared towards my personal taste) I'm guessing? that your lighting is from the top front right- but it'd be nice to make that more distinct, then make shads based on that light. i love her dress, but because it's purple, and the majority of the picture is blue, the eye focuses on her dress, and not her face. (but that's color theory and i'm struggling with that too) for learning about skin, what happened to me was i found a lineart of a bust, and i learned by drawing in shadows to imply bone structure and referencing. So i'd suggest you do that, since alot of linearts will definitely be boosted once you learn to draw in your own shadows. alright, i'll stop, i'm ranting, but again, kudos on the picture, you did really well, and i hope to see you grow
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Nephilym In reply to Sun-like-Rain [2010-06-29 21:36:21 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much for the advice! I appreciate you taking the time to write all of it! I'll definatley work on the shadows, maybe I'll just sit down and practice just doing shading and not worrying about anything else. I kinda felt that the shading was a bit weak, and the little I had started getting lost with all the effects and layers thrown on top of it. I hadn't really thought of trying to imply bone structure through shading, I'll look into it!
Thanks again so much!
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motherofsnow [2010-06-29 17:37:07 +0000 UTC]
The colouring looks great!
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Nephilym In reply to motherofsnow [2010-06-29 21:29:51 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I peeked at your work, and I really like your coloring style, It almost looks like you use color pencils and watercolor? It's a neat mix, looks good!
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JNetRocks [2010-06-29 16:18:36 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for taking the time to color this! I think it came out quite beautiful, really. I know your frustration with backgrounds, I've only just started to really explore that part of my artwork myself. Most of my pieces have flat color backgrounds or quickly painted clouds lol. And we all have something we dislike with our pieces, the best thing to do is just keep practicing.
For your third attempt at coloring, this is really fantastic! I love the transparent cape, that is an awesome touch and it makes it really unique! I still love the texture you used for the purple cloth, it really looks like a heavy material with those crevices in it. The only thing that my eyes keep getting drawn to is her lips. I think that shade for her lips might be a tad dark, it just sort of keeps drawing my attention away from everything else.
Beautiful work here and thank you so much!
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JNetRocks In reply to Nephilym [2010-07-01 20:16:42 +0000 UTC]
I think everyone has trouble with colors some times. I try to look at the image a bit and think of what I want to do with it, what feel I want it to have you know? Then I put down my base colors, each 'section' on a new layer, like "coat" "pants" "skin" "Hair". Then, when I have the 'fill in' colors done, I can go back and change the color of each individual area until I get a scheme I'm happy with. Then, when I settle, I merge some of the layers together so it's not overwhelming. I usually lave skin and hair as their own layers so I can play with them seperately.
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Palatin [2010-06-29 14:08:34 +0000 UTC]
I think it is an amazing color-job. I have to commend especially the transparent parts of the clothes and the look of the metal.
I have only one tip: Try to make it perfect of course, but don't obsess over it - when you create something you will always have issues with this or that detail, but other people will see your work with different eyes.
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