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The river churned and slapped far bellow at stone walls that towered over its banks. These walls, such odd structures, they could only have been built by the Two-legs, or humans, as some came to call them. Many began to speculate they where built to keep the rivers at bay during seasons of flooding, it was quite an intelligent thing to do. However It made the banks difficult to access, and only could they be reached where the stone walls crumbled, from tree roots that pushed through weakened cracks.    

 

Heavy grey clouds refused to break to clear skies or give into a storm. Instead it drizzled, such a light rain it was nearly mistakable for a mist, and it had been this way for several days. The earth was soaked, trees sagged and dripped, sodden with water, even the air felt damp, cold and moist with each breath. It was quite near the shore, despite the low roar of an angry river bellow, the usual cry of gulls was absent, no life on the banks. Empty, except for a lithe black cat stood atop one of those crumbled walls, he has stiff and still, seeming to take no notice of that rain that soaked through his thin fur. Deadstar was watching the shores intently, white blue eyes wide and slit, unmoving, but it wasn't only the churning waters that set this cat on unease. For even dirty and broken, his white pelt stood out like a sore on the pebbled beach. It was Whitestep, a young Shadowclan warrior who had simply vanished from camp nearly a moon ago. Prior to his disappearance his white pelt had cost them an invasion on Thunderclan territory. Now that Deadstar thought back, it was foolish for the Shadowclan leader to have brought him, such colour, a kit wouldn't have been fooled by his attempt at stealth. How could he call himself a proper Shadowclan warrior if he wasn't gifted with the colours of shadow, of night. He was a stain. Deadstar scolded Whitestep for his carelessness, in front of the entire clan.

 

The Shadowclan leader drew his lips back, teeth clenched, white eyes wide and unmoving and body rigid. He had hoped for Whitestep to simply vanish, for the Shadowclan leader knew in his gut that if they ever did find Whitestep, he wouldn't be walking back to camp on his own paws. The young tom stood like that, black fur slicked to his body from the moisture, until the rest of his patrol had caught up. Two toms and a she-cat drew near, bounding across the flat expanse of stone to the walls edge and questioning murmur rippled through them at their sudden halt. Suddenly the she-cat let out a gasp of unbelieving horror, such a cry seemed to echo hollowly in Dradstar's ears, distant, it rolled over the river.

 

"Whitestep! Dear Starclan...that can't Whitestep." Without even a glance at Deadstar the she-cat dashed past her leader, scrambling down the rocky wall, face wide with sorrow and fear. Normally Deadstar would have scolded such rash actions but he stood unmoving, the remaining warriors looked at him with uncertainty seeking some sort of recognition from the black tom, hesitating for a several moments, before they too dipped past him down the shore after their fellow warrior.

 

The three cats gathered around the white body, and the sobs of the she-cat only confirmed that it was indeed Whitestep who was washed up along the shore. Finally Deadstar dipped his head, eyes becoming narrowed one again and he padded softly down the crumbling wall toward his warriors. His paw steps across the pebbled beach where careful, soft, stones sharp and cold against his soft pads. As he approached the two toms looked to him, while the she-cat remained sobbing, hunched over the broken body, not even acknowledging her leaders presence.

 Deadstar finally brought himself to look more closely at the fallen warrior, Whitestep's eyes where glassy and his body looked water logged. Deadstar thought he must have drown, but his face was contorted in a faded look of horror. Silence persisted over them once more as Deadstar studied the scene in front of them from a distance, his face hard, and unreadable. One of the tom-cat warriors finally went to open his mouth attempting to speak his apologies for taking off as he did, but the leader silenced him with a firm flick of his tail. 

 

"Return his body to the camp, be sure to alert his family to return if they are still on patrol." The warriors nodded, turning to murmur for the she-cat to move, she stood reluctant for a while before finally nodding and getting to her paws and the began to drag Whitestep across the pebbly shore. Deadstar stepped back as they passed, keeping his distance from the corpse. 

 

"Will you return with us Deadstar?" The warrior asked before grasping the body once more. 

 

"I'll be back before You reach camp." He remarked, at the pace in which they hauled the corpse. "However, I'll be heading up shore before I return." 

 

The warriors nodded and continued to pull the body forth through the pebbles. Deadstar stood still on the shore, watching until the tip of Whitestep's tail disappeared over the wall. There was a chill on the black toms neck, like an icy breath, and an all to familiar sense came over him, before Shadowclan's leader gave a shake of his ebony pelt and took off, fading into the coming shadows of Sunfall.


The White Warrior plot begins....



Alright! Everyone of AW, or perhaps new members? *Eyebrow wiggle*, our first plot has been set in motion, and will official begin on July 1st when we hold our first clan gathering tomorrow on The Half-Bridge! 

So how does this affect your cat? well, thats up too you! Whitestep was a warrior of Shadowclan, some whisper that Deadstar killed him, do you believe he committed the act? an accident? or was something else at work? This is all up to the opinions of your cat! feel free to take action as the plot unravels, it is up to the choices your cat makes on what will occur, so make your choices, investigate, and choose your friends carefully.


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Comments: 27

MelissaBlackWolf [2015-07-31 03:25:26 +0000 UTC]

The feels ;-;

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Merilda16 [2015-07-01 01:57:23 +0000 UTC]

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Nermsters In reply to Merilda16 [2015-07-01 03:11:50 +0000 UTC]

awwww, you should def do art/story about that, would love to see his reaction, actually, I'm posting an event in Shadowclan camp soon where Deadstar brings back the body, you can rp the reaction their with your clan mates!

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Merilda16 In reply to Nermsters [2015-07-02 02:14:28 +0000 UTC]

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Nermsters In reply to Merilda16 [2015-07-02 03:16:00 +0000 UTC]

Haha, btw did you see the assignment? I gave Ya and Adderfang?

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Merilda16 In reply to Nermsters [2015-07-02 21:34:06 +0000 UTC]

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Nermsters In reply to Merilda16 [2015-07-02 22:24:26 +0000 UTC]

Sounds awesomeness! Be sure to post its ori help prin

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Merilda16 In reply to Nermsters [2015-07-03 01:38:42 +0000 UTC]

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painkrc99 [2015-06-30 18:14:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh I remember Whitestep when reading the list of Shadowclan kitties
how he slightly ruined the safety for bright colored kitties
it's funny how Copper's only friend is Deadstar X33 and now there's
whispering of bad things about his dead buddy

pun of deadstar pssh

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Nermsters In reply to painkrc99 [2015-06-30 20:51:19 +0000 UTC]

haha yup! poor little whitestep :c

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painkrc99 In reply to Nermsters [2015-06-30 20:54:58 +0000 UTC]

well at least he'll have a better life in starclan ;3

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Nermsters In reply to painkrc99 [2015-06-30 21:07:27 +0000 UTC]

just wanted to make his mother proud, perhaps now he can from the stars.

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painkrc99 In reply to Nermsters [2015-06-30 21:14:45 +0000 UTC]

Whitestep YOU SHALL INSPIRE MANY EVEN THOUGH YOU ARE GONE
NO CAT WILL EVER FORGET YOU 

oh god I'm remembering badgerpaw the littlest warrior -cry- IT WAS SO SAD

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SpittingInsanity [2015-06-30 16:03:03 +0000 UTC]

Wow the drawing is so...wow i never seen anything like this before i really do think its awesome great work. Also awesome writing skills I could really get into the story.

I was thinking that is it would be okay for whitestep to be my cat (adderfang) mentor in the past?

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Nermsters In reply to SpittingInsanity [2015-06-30 16:05:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh why thank you! I'm so glad you guys like it, its awesome to see hype about this! ill be posting more of these during important plot points~

Whitestep was a young warrior himself when he went missing, so i do not believe he would be old enough to take on an apprentice. As Whitestep was about Adderfangs age.

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SpittingInsanity In reply to Nermsters [2015-06-30 16:08:19 +0000 UTC]

ohh okay gotta, i thought he was a bit older then Adderfang. Okay cool ill just make them friends or something then. If thats cool haha

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Nermsters In reply to SpittingInsanity [2015-06-30 16:10:23 +0000 UTC]

Friends would work! Ill be making a starclan pic for him soon with a bio, Whitestep kept to himself mostly, a very shy cat, who just kind took what was given to him. He was very sweet, a hard worker, but very self conscious. also a mama's boy c;

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SpittingInsanity In reply to Nermsters [2015-06-30 16:17:13 +0000 UTC]

Awe he sounds very cute i was re-reading this and it made me think of ashfur and how he was found haha  

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Nermsters In reply to SpittingInsanity [2015-06-30 16:18:07 +0000 UTC]

ooh yes i remember that, never even realized that haha

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SpittingInsanity In reply to Nermsters [2015-06-30 19:26:53 +0000 UTC]

I was kinda thinking and u got an idea once a Sunday like every two months we could like update are reffs

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Nermsters In reply to SpittingInsanity [2015-06-30 20:50:49 +0000 UTC]

wait, what? I'm sorry i don't understand what you mean or are trying to say? update the reffs for what?

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SpittingInsanity In reply to Nermsters [2015-06-30 20:53:52 +0000 UTC]

for the relationships 

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Nermsters In reply to SpittingInsanity [2015-06-30 20:55:10 +0000 UTC]

ah, yes relationships are simply updated on your own time after you rp with other characters or your cats opinion on a character has changed

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JSyle [2015-06-30 07:30:47 +0000 UTC]

Holy smokes. 0.0 First of all, the image is eerily amazing, it is so.....accurate? I'm bad with finding the right words, oh well. And the music really sets the tone.
Then the plot. Wow...Just wow. It is really sad, but it just drew me in. I want to say I'm excited for it but it feels wrong (I'm listening to the music again, really setting me on edge), I'm going to try my hardest to have Rainblossom come to the gathering for sure though. 

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Nermsters In reply to JSyle [2015-06-30 15:33:06 +0000 UTC]

eeeh, thank you! I'm so glad you like it! I have so many ideas for how to move this plot along :3

can't wait for the gathering tomorrow~

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JSyle In reply to Nermsters [2015-06-30 15:38:15 +0000 UTC]

When do you plan on having it?

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Nermsters In reply to JSyle [2015-06-30 16:00:25 +0000 UTC]

apocalyptic-warrior.deviantart…
here is the format, just bellow the original format it says 'Starclna/Dark forest' Application.

and about when, to be honest i am not certain, i talked to the original person who created them about making new ones and she got right on it. ill go talk to her now and see about a timeline. It should be soon. ill get back too you.

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