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mickleo [2014-02-08 02:47:50 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Firstly, I LOVE these characters. ;u; I like Neros crooked hat and his clothes. Kuro looks so mysterious. due
So, I think the textures on this drawing is beautiful! It's very neat and clean, the texture blends well, and the lines are perfectly thick and thin at the right angles and stuff. ^U^ I love how beautifully the background colors are blended! The rosy sunsetting scene. <3 The expressions are very well captured. Nero looks troubled, determined, and brave. Kuro looks mysterious, possibly sad, maybe a bit of anger, and also determined. They both seem to have this 'calm intensity'. Marvelous. I can almost hear intense music playing. 8D
Now, for some helpful art tips and such, lets start with the background.
The sun seems to be shining right behind them, right? So, the sun would be a little brighter than that maybe. The sun would almost blur out the figures that it's shining off of like, their backs. The light would be shining more severely on their back ends, and the furthest part possibly a little more shaded. The light would eliminate most of the picture where the sun is in the picture, so it would almost be like a silhouette.
Now, for the characters themselves. Again, where the light is, the black line art might be a little more faded or brightened, maybe even erased to give the light a little more realisticness. Uhm, everything else in this picture seems perfect to me! <3 AWESOME job.
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mickleo [2014-02-08 02:32:42 +0000 UTC]
The shading is beautiful!
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NeroInu In reply to mickleo [2014-02-09 20:34:13 +0000 UTC]
Heheh, oh wow thank you X3
Ah, by the way thank you very much for the review, I was waiting for a while for someone to come and do the thing :U
Ahhh I agree with you, the lightning could have been a bit more strong on this one. I'm definitely trying out coloring over the lineart so it looks more realistic. It is something I haven't done so I'm off to experiment!~
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mickleo In reply to NeroInu [2014-02-10 23:48:08 +0000 UTC]
No problemo!
Okay, great! C: I lurv experimenting~
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NeroInu In reply to mickleo [2014-02-11 05:20:23 +0000 UTC]
Yayyy for experimenting!!
Except for certain no-no things
I sure hope you know what things XDD
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mickleo In reply to NeroInu [2014-02-11 23:47:23 +0000 UTC]
XD
*cough cough* yeah *cough* XD I do.
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BluSilurus [2014-01-09 03:56:29 +0000 UTC]
Funny thing everything you are insecure with in the picture I think were done wonderfuly- owo
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NeroInu In reply to BluSilurus [2014-01-09 07:21:40 +0000 UTC]
AH BLUE FFFNNNGH<3
*pets face*
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BluSilurus In reply to NeroInu [2014-01-09 07:53:40 +0000 UTC]
Heheh ovo
*Tail wags from pets* Ohnocatinstincts
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Shadowspirit2001 [2014-01-08 03:23:21 +0000 UTC]
You did AWESOME!!!! >w<
Nero's the tall thingy and Kuro's the fluffy thingy??? XDDD very descriptive Nero!
Soooooo Nero's supposed to be some-what of a representation of you? hmmmm?....but you say your short? soooooo.....-w-
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NeroInu In reply to Shadowspirit2001 [2014-01-09 07:21:05 +0000 UTC]
HEY I CAN DREAM YO
I'm as descrptive as a... descriptive... thing
thing
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Shadowspirit2001 In reply to NeroInu [2014-01-10 01:21:51 +0000 UTC]
...."I HAVE A DREAM TO BE MODERATELY TALL...." XDDDD
yeaahhhhh.....I'm short too but I don't wanna be super tall. XD
Nero is as descriptive as a descriptive thing????? O-o XD
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Emi-the-InuGami [2014-01-07 14:38:47 +0000 UTC]
OMGILLOVEDIIIISSSS and IIIIII kid you not youyouyouoyu need to give me a shading and shadow how to talk.. I mean... HOW DA HECK YOU DO DAT QAQ and Kuro more mature? XDD
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NeroInu In reply to Emi-the-InuGami [2014-01-09 07:20:19 +0000 UTC]
The essence of nice shading is...
Cheese. Lots and lots of cheese. I'll teach you how to use that cheese appropiately another time, though<3
*slaps* I SAID NERO, DUDE
THE TALL HATTY ONE
NOT THE EMO CHIHUAHUA
FFFFFF
XDD
And yeh, maturererer.....erer
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HoshPosh [2014-01-07 05:38:35 +0000 UTC]
WOA dude, Chu are to amazing holy flip (>:U/) XD
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NeroInu In reply to HoshPosh [2014-01-09 07:18:09 +0000 UTC]
Awhhh I'm blushu >///<
Thank you very much Sculkie! You 2 NICE MMMNGH
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HoshPosh In reply to NeroInu [2014-01-10 01:54:38 +0000 UTC]
Lol nuuu problemo dude! ^o^
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ViNa-Shiranui [2014-01-07 05:36:06 +0000 UTC]
Looks good!
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NeroInu In reply to ViNa-Shiranui [2014-01-09 07:17:21 +0000 UTC]
Heheh, thank you! I tried to give it a good presentation and clean it as best as I could X'D
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ViNa-Shiranui In reply to NeroInu [2014-01-09 08:26:16 +0000 UTC]
The placement/composition is definitely well done!
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NeroInu In reply to ViNa-Shiranui [2014-01-09 20:34:35 +0000 UTC]
Heeey you think so? Yehh even I was really happy with the way I arranged everything, for once XD
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ViNa-Shiranui In reply to NeroInu [2014-01-09 22:13:22 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. It really adds a lot to the piece.
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CelestialRainicorn [2014-01-07 05:10:36 +0000 UTC]
This reminds me of several tings. Nice job!
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