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Bo-Po-Mo-Fo [2016-10-27 01:38:24 +0000 UTC]
This is really great! I can see that you have improved a lot since your previous version. Really wonderful job! I really like all of the folds you put into the skirt. Often times people do those typical "anime" folds where skirts or capes will have one or two consistent folds, but real fabric doesn't work that way, so way to go! I really like the soft lighting that comes from the lamp, especially seeing it on the cat. I think the cat is probably my favorite part about the whole piece since you really captured a lot of movement in its body. I also really like the shape of her bottom knee. I really struggle with painting knees so I always notice when somebody does a good job.
One thing that I noticed is that the broom is slightly on the long side. It's not a problem -- maybe flying brooms are extra long! Part of why this happened is because her skirt is so long that the length and perspective of the broom was sorta forgotten in place of the skirt. A way to avoid that kind of thing happening is to keep measurements for something like a broom or staff or something similar on a separate layer and then refer back to that measurement frequently during the painting process.
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GoddessLuna2020 [2016-10-25 20:42:21 +0000 UTC]
This is beautifuel !!!
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Neshrie [2016-10-25 00:31:39 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! You're right, the broom does look a bit long doesn't it? I'll have to keep an eye on stuff like that in the future!
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DSegno92 [2016-10-24 07:33:40 +0000 UTC]
From comparison, I prefer this: it's more dinamic with the diagonal cut, and the effect of the wind is more evident, expecially now that the cat doesn't float in the air. But I have to admit, the black moon was a nice touch
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Neshrie In reply to DSegno92 [2016-10-25 00:30:25 +0000 UTC]
I do admit I like that one in the first one, I just couldn't work it into this painting without making it look silly. Thanks for the feedback!
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DSegno92 In reply to Neshrie [2016-10-25 07:47:30 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!
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