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*** EDIT 26.01.2021: Rewrote the short story text




Shadows of Efrafa


Chapter 1: Kurai - Part 1


At first it appeared like just another ordinary day on patrol until Campion and his Owslas found an unknown buck in the forest.
He was alone, sitting there on a clearing just as if he was waiting for them. His smell was odd like cold and wet dirt - but there was also another note to it Campion couldn't quite figure out at this point. His fur colors were unusual just as his bloodred eyes. Everything about this guy was... strange.
They caught him without any resistance and he followed them without any questions asked.
Campion never experienced a capture like this before.

On the way back to the warren Campion kept close to the unknown rabbit.
After some time of silence he finally asked: "Who are you?"
His counterpart answered with amusement in his voice: "Obviously a stranger."
Surprised of this bold answer in this tense situation the captain asked further: "Okay, then what's your name, stranger?"
A few moments passed just as if the other bucks thoughts were wandering off abit. He then grinned and answered: "Why should I tell you my name if I don't even know yours?"

Campion, visibly irritated that someone could give such insolent answers to his catchers, replied: "I don't have time for this kind of ridiculous chitchat."
The nameless stranger finally said: "So we both will stay nameless, am I right, captain?"

And they entered the heart of Efrafa.

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Pew~! No easy job to translate my thoughts of this scene in english x//D
But I think it's okay! >w<

Eeeh I am sorry for this crappy picture :"D so much... green x"D
And Cutter looks so skinny o_O Actually he is a really big one xD

I hope you like it and you'll follow my story!

Yours,
Nesuki

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Campion by Richard Adams
Cutter, Kurai and art by me

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Comments: 35

dropkiick [2021-01-26 16:46:06 +0000 UTC]

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Nesuki In reply to dropkiick [2021-01-26 19:23:23 +0000 UTC]

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dropkiick In reply to Nesuki [2021-01-26 20:56:23 +0000 UTC]

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GoldenIvory [2014-05-05 13:42:40 +0000 UTC]

Cool!! Wie konnte ich das übersehen? *~* Mehr zu lesen *A*

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Nesuki In reply to GoldenIvory [2014-05-12 08:50:26 +0000 UTC]

Ahww du bist einfach so sweet ;A;
Ziehst dir alles rein wow

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ladyepic247 [2012-07-05 05:18:04 +0000 UTC]

LOL, LOVE the story

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Nesuki In reply to ladyepic247 [2012-07-05 06:33:31 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you do!!

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ladyepic247 In reply to Nesuki [2012-07-05 07:19:59 +0000 UTC]

me to

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NZealo [2012-05-04 00:34:41 +0000 UTC]

Watership Down! I was always hoping someone would make their one little story from it.

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Nesuki In reply to NZealo [2012-05-04 06:25:06 +0000 UTC]

Ahw really?? >v<
That's so cool!

Got 6 chapters of my WSD story by this time ^v^

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InfinitePocky [2012-04-25 13:45:31 +0000 UTC]

I love this guys attitude. Good job translating! But I must point out one thing "catched" should actually be "caught".

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Nesuki In reply to InfinitePocky [2012-04-25 15:45:46 +0000 UTC]

Ahww thanks!! >//<
It's so nice to hear that you like it so much!

Oh! I haven't noticed that! °-°
I'm embarrassed .///."" But thanks so much for telling me that! >//<
Now it's corrected ^v^

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MoondragonEismond [2012-03-19 13:51:50 +0000 UTC]

Dieser schwarz-braune Hase sieht echt gut aus^^
Der skeptische Blick des sitzenden ist Klasse xD

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Nesuki In reply to MoondragonEismond [2012-03-19 15:29:48 +0000 UTC]

Danke sehr! x3~
chrchrchr ja... Kurai hat n krasses Design, ne? x"D
Weiß auch nich wie ich DA drauf gekommen bin °x°

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MoondragonEismond In reply to Nesuki [2012-03-19 19:41:50 +0000 UTC]

Manche Char's entstehen eben auf wundersame weise^^

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Varjokani [2012-03-12 07:45:04 +0000 UTC]

Aww.. I love your art. Bunnies are cute yes, but when you draw a rabbit you make them so sexy and so cool!

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Nesuki In reply to Varjokani [2012-03-12 10:43:02 +0000 UTC]

Ahwwww really??! Q////Q
Thank you very very much!! >v< *fluff*

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Varjokani In reply to Nesuki [2012-03-12 11:04:12 +0000 UTC]

Yes yes yes...

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Campion1 [2012-03-11 11:43:21 +0000 UTC]

I sense nothing but trouble with that one.

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Nesuki In reply to Campion1 [2012-03-11 11:57:04 +0000 UTC]

Kurai: Oh and I suppose you're right! *evil grin*

x3

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Myrkin [2012-03-11 10:05:16 +0000 UTC]

Good drawing.

I'm sure that other officers wouldn't be so... forgiving with this stranger.

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Nesuki In reply to Myrkin [2012-03-11 10:59:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^w^
Haha I think Campion was just too surprised to react otherwise :3

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D0omy [2012-03-10 20:04:28 +0000 UTC]

WOUNDIII oder ist der beiges kaninchen woundi? in alten sieth er so aus

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Nesuki In reply to D0omy [2012-03-10 21:55:36 +0000 UTC]

Ne Woundwort ist da gar nicht drauf ^^"

Das braune Kaninchen ist Campion und die anderen beiden sind OCs von mir.

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D0omy In reply to Nesuki [2012-03-11 11:43:34 +0000 UTC]

achso...aber ganz gut ^^ und ich weiß dass der braune campion ist...ich war etwas irritiert weil woundwort früher so ähnlich ausah...nur ohne die narben :3

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Nesuki In reply to D0omy [2012-03-11 11:52:54 +0000 UTC]

Achsu ^v^
Aber ich habe sowieso immer Schwierigkeiten Campion zu zeichnen... Bei mir sieht der nie richtig aus wie Campion...

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D0omy In reply to Nesuki [2012-03-11 13:29:11 +0000 UTC]

doch ^^

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Pharaonenfuchs [2012-03-10 16:08:53 +0000 UTC]

Awwww ein tolles Bild zu einer tollen Szene >////<
Ich find du hast es supertollig übersetzt! ^o^
Ich mag deinen Kurai auch voll ;u; Ganz schön dreist

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Nesuki In reply to Pharaonenfuchs [2012-03-10 21:57:13 +0000 UTC]

Ehrlich?? Q///Q
Dankeschön!! >//< Das freut echt total dass du Kurai magst .3.

Ouhjaaah das isser wirklich x//D
DEN Schneid hätt nich xD

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Pharaonenfuchs In reply to Nesuki [2012-03-10 22:27:05 +0000 UTC]

Jaa ganz ehrlich >///<
Ja und wie >///< Allein schon die farben von ihm <333 Und natürlich die Persönlichkeit

Boah ja ich auch nicht, nie und nimmer XDDD

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Moss33333 [2012-03-10 15:29:24 +0000 UTC]

Sehr schönes Bild und Kurai ist zu geil perfekte Antworten ^^

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Nesuki In reply to Moss33333 [2012-03-10 15:32:34 +0000 UTC]

Ehrlich??! >//v//<
Dankeschön!! Q///Q

Stelle mir das auch zu geil vor wie trocken er sagt "Obviously a stranger... uû" x//DD

Dankesehr! <3

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Oukami-SuGo [2012-03-10 15:03:09 +0000 UTC]

Absolut genial! Sehr schöne Farben und alles drum und dran - wie immer x3
Kurai ist so ein geiler Chara!

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Nesuki In reply to Oukami-SuGo [2012-03-10 15:07:55 +0000 UTC]

Findest du?? >///<
Dankeschön!! x//3 Bin voll froh dass ich mir jetzt mal in den Hintern treten konnte mit dem Storykram hier anzufangen!
*flautz*

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Oukami-SuGo In reply to Nesuki [2012-03-10 15:12:05 +0000 UTC]

Ja klar
Ich freu mich schon den Comic dann zu lesen x3

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