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Neumorin — Punk Lolita Design
Published: 2008-11-02 19:28:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 19615; Favourites: 456; Downloads: 2322
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This is my entry for the current design contest on [link] (Fanplusfriend)This is for the punk lolita category. I hope I get more than the measley 4 votes I got last time. Pout.
:3
So if you like it, pleeeaaassseeee take a few seconds to register with the forum and vote for me. <3
Because I really want this outfit and so do you, haha.
Vote here: [link]
For 4B14!
Edit:
I am aware the legs look too short. I'll fix it when I have time. For now, please focus on the clothes and try not to be distracted by my anatomical errors.
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Comments: 62
Well, first of all, I love the design.
Also, I don't mean to offend you, I say this as like, a helpful artistic critique , but I just wanted to say something I noticed consistently with almost all of your full bodies is that you tend to draw them 4-5 heads high, which makes them look very squished! Have you ever tried to make them closer to 6-7 heads? I was taught in my Figure Drawing classes to do bodies 6-7 heads high. (Main points should go something like top of head to chin, chin to nipples, nipples to belly button, belly button to pelvis, and I get messed up at the last two points, but it's something like pelvis to knees, knees to feet.)
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i would deffinatly wear that it's amazing!!<3333
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i would deffinatly wear that it's amazing!!<3333
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i really like this and was thinking of makeing this (with your permission)so i was wondering any pointers of makeing this?
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Oooh yay, sadly I don't know what I could give you for pointers... other than good luck XD
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thanks lol im actually aslmost finished the out fit lol i just kinda layed it out in my head and went for it
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Sweet, I would love to see it!
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i drew out the finished product on my page cuz i dont have my camra so if you care to see its on my gall
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It looks all right, but the anatomy is all wrong. The design itself is splendid
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ooo cute u shud look at jessica louise's line at hottopic. its just like this!! i love it!
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Agh, I love this!
Plaid though art forever amazing.
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That is damned smexy!
If i had moneez i'd buy that off you... well... when it's more than just a design...
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Out of all the entries, I personally really liked this one. 
The chains and the layering make the whole design very eye-catching. It does a great job of being punk but still recognizable as lolita.
I think my favorite part are the sleeves.
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That's really hot!
Kind of reminds me of Princess Ai
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It's such a cute outfit!
I'm short, so I don't really care about her legs.
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Can people stop making a big deal about the legs?
(MAYBE SOME OF US ARE NOT PROPORTIONED CORRECTLY.)
In any case, it's the design that counts.
I entered again, but I am so not going to win.
Votes for B38: 0
8D
Have you seen the ones winning for EGA and the Sweet/Punk Lolita? BLARGH.
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I KNOW
These lolita types don't know what's good anymore.
Haha.
Let's lose together! : D
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Haha, we're quite tasteful losers. Those frilly lolis can just miss out on our awesome clothes while we relish our 12% discount. XD
Blah, maybe I should just stop trying and go marry Naoto Hirooka. HA.
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Holy shit I forgot about that 12% discount! I should go spend some money on F+F soon...
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Get on that quick! Too bad we can't combine them, because I would have 36% off.
Good thing I don't live in Japan... F+F and RTBU suck up all my money already. So terrible, yet so satisfying. 8D
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Haha yes indeed, now that I don't have time to make my own clothes... it is all too tempting.
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I think you will win that contest...becuse ALOT of your fashion designs are just to amazingly creative to turn down.
Plus, this is so far my favorite design out of your lolita stuff. If it where in existence, i'd buy it and where it everyday! XD
And i think the figure in the dress is just perfect. I like her! (espesilly her hair!)
You'll win
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Aw thank you so much! It would be really awesome to win. So far I am winning though!
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Love the design but I can't get pass the short legs. =[
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I think it's the angle from which I took the photo of the picture. They don't seem tooooo short to me, but then again I'm really short.
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wow this is awesome!! i love punk and lolita fashion. ^^
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Interesting design, although a bit of a blur to the eyes. I know the plaid is quite common with lolita punk style, but it just looks...a bit overdone? Maybe even close to gaudy? I suppose after having designed garments before and doing quite a bit of tailoring on my own, sometimes too much detail is what can ruin a piece.
Love the layering, just think it would have looked better with a little less detail. Maybe even with simply the lack of gloves and leggings? In my opinion, the dress should be the stand out here, not the ripped and tattered bits. 
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I'm sure DA owes you at least a few votes. Consider it +1 now.
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I very much enjoy the entirety of this outfit design. :0
Especially the layering~
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i normally don't like the punk lolita look (i loooovee lolita though ^_^)
but i really would love to see this made because it looks realllllllly realllllly good =].
so i voted.
good luck!
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loves it, i have a friend who would most likely wear something like that all the time if she could.
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I know. But I don't care, because it's a fashion design not an anatomical drawing.
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But as you might notice, most people wearing clothes are indeed anatomically correct. Proportions are still important, even if your focus is the clothing.
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I cater to the underrepresented, freak-proportioned crowd.
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Won't somebody please think of the disproportioned minority!
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I mean hell, my legs are that short and I get along fine.
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