Kumira-chan [2018-12-21 00:18:34 +0000 UTC]
Aww, it's been so long since I've last read an Hetalia fic ! That's nice ~However, reading it at 1 a.m. may not have been my best idea since I completely missed the signs and was really surprised by the China x Reader at the end X)As for the French used ("Ah, bon nuit mon amie. Ça vas?"), there are just two little mistakes "bon" -> "bonne" and "vas" -> "va". Though, I guess "Ah, bonsoir mon amie. Tu vas bien ?" would flow more naturally (as "bonne nuit" is almost exclusively used when somebody goes to sleep, and "Tu vas bien ?" is a more formal "Ça va ?" which goes well with "my friend" - when used unironically). Btw, I have no idea what vodka tastes like either. °w°
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