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NFG24 — The Color Of You
Published: 2011-03-23 03:59:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 261; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 5
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Description if i'd to praise you in colors said
to paint out my pathos for you
pink, blue, and red are your wonderment
these are the tones for the ways you come true


pink, of the first, but nary the least
is the need you've affected in me
affectionate touch, your specialty love
this curse is a blessing too wide and too deep


blue is the lock to which you are key
in of bonds and of ties when we met
just as the sun has its rising and sleep
so are your vows as loyally kept


red runs your dying fervor for us
ebbing flow to i and from you
here in this sea drifting on with our trust
i drown for i know you'll come too


the likes of these three, i cannot repay
still to be elderly, working my bones
every hour from home, i'll never betray
if, loving me, you'll never postpone



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these are the ways
the things that i say
when i'm thinking of you
and of me

this is the place
the space that i save
is here between you
between me
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Comments: 2

MariJoanna [2011-03-23 14:51:31 +0000 UTC]

This is still one of the most beautiful things you've ever written, by far.

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NFG24 In reply to MariJoanna [2011-03-23 20:30:03 +0000 UTC]

I know. I haven't topped it yet. But I remember thinking the same thing about quite a few others I'd written. Who knows when the next good one will happen! It could be tomorrow!

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