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Published: 2013-03-09 18:30:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 2156; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 109
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Description This job just keeps getting better and better. The Freelancer scanned the alien landscape as they neared the ruins... too many places for an ambush, and behind him his employers bumbling along like they were in some hotel. At least the native guide they hired knew how to exercise caution, looking left and right warily as she gracefully weaved up the crumbling hillside.

He thought his career move was a good idea at the time. When he mustered out of the military he had just enough to put a down payment on a small scout ship. Guide and Guard for hire. Take you where you want to go, bring you back safe. Catering to all the cash-carrying VIPs. VIPs.... a couple of wet-nosed archaeologists more interested in some crumbling artifact than a poisonous, quill-flinging razorworm basking on it. It didn't matter this world was classified an Amber Zone: Travel at your own risk. Science and learning won't be hindered and all that crap.

His ship was now barely in view in the mist-covered valley below and now as they reached the top of the hill, the ruins his passengers came to explore now began to emerge among the rocks and scrub. They looked about with oblivious wonder to each other as the group progressed. Around them, small native reptiles skittered from their resting places among the rocks, following the people curiously. Suddenly ahead, their guide stopped dead in her tracks, her hands on the large curved blade she carried. From her tense pose he could tell something wasn't right. Instinctively he dropped to a knee and held up a fist for the group to stop and take note. The two archaeologists stood there blankly, still looking about the ruins oblivious to danger. 'Damn tourists', he thought as he thumbed the safety switch on his weapon....
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Comments: 14

AmongTheFirst [2014-06-06 01:28:46 +0000 UTC]

Love the story

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NICELabs In reply to AmongTheFirst [2014-06-06 03:20:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much  

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NICELabs [2013-03-09 22:47:09 +0000 UTC]

Heh.. I'll be 47 in a month (shudder) so I'm old school Trek myself . Redshirts are there to show how the monster works

So any preference to the threat at hand? Monster? Unruly natives? long lost evil in the ruins? Rival archaeologists trying to reach the discovery first?

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madaigual [2013-03-09 21:05:08 +0000 UTC]


________

...And?

You can't leave it there NICELabs
(the male archaeologist is definitely a cool dude in a non-cool dude environment ...Throw him to the lions!)

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NICELabs In reply to madaigual [2013-03-09 21:23:17 +0000 UTC]

Hehe... well, they may be lucky if there are just lions here I've thrown a few ideas your way for your fabulous series, so turnabout is fair play... where do you think I should head with this?

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madaigual In reply to NICELabs [2013-03-09 21:41:08 +0000 UTC]

Cool dude has to go (painfully)! Dudette is most certainly prisioner material - We already have the rescue party - I just see the archaeologist as the doomed red shirted ensign on Star Trek - Showing my age!

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Bowski--Productions [2013-03-09 19:19:41 +0000 UTC]

Great job mate, I love the diversity in your scenes

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NICELabs In reply to Bowski--Productions [2013-03-09 19:23:23 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks Glad you enjoy my own style of random thought

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Bowski--Productions In reply to NICELabs [2013-03-09 19:28:03 +0000 UTC]

I do matey, truly

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ShadowhawkOne [2013-03-09 18:57:47 +0000 UTC]

I love the build up in the scene and the way the story compliments it perfectly. Your story telling is an absolute wonder and I love how effortlessly the two go together! this one will go into my list of favorites!

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NICELabs In reply to ShadowhawkOne [2013-03-09 19:23:53 +0000 UTC]

Appreciate that my friend I'm very glad you find it all to your liking

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ShadowhawkOne In reply to NICELabs [2013-03-09 19:33:26 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome.

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Blades-123 [2013-03-09 18:36:51 +0000 UTC]

Great looking group, nice composition.

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NICELabs In reply to Blades-123 [2013-03-09 18:43:35 +0000 UTC]

thanks Glad you like it

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