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| GALLERY | FANPAGE | INSTAGRAM | YOUTUBE | COMMISSION INFORMAION Original Fantasy Work!
If you remember, the girl is my OC name Vanilla. And the elf behind her is childhood friend name Naotora
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You're welcome and thank you for visiting my gallery ^ ^
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The angle is SO good! Awesome job on the lighting and you captured the girl mid-motion very well. I love it!
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Thanks you so much!
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Love the composition and the lighting! Great job!!
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simply gorgeous work.
I am not sure how to describe but beyond stunning artwork.
I am not really a fan of manga or anime but i find it intricate work
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So overall this is a really, really great illustration. I usually do these critiques with the intent of helping struggling artist who don't have a handle on things like anatomy, lighting, composition, etc. These are all things you are nailing with a few slight nitpicks. Overall the anatomy is really great. I think the few areas that stand out to me are first her should seems very wide and it's sticking out in a more masculine way than I think it should Also her back seems a little to hunched over and is giving her a very slight hunch back look. I think the area that actually bothers me the most is the hair. In a few spots I can see the inside of her hair it looks hollow, this is very weird and really stands out because you have done so much to make this look awesome that the negatives are very highlighted.
Moving on to the lighting, i really like what you have done. It has a very serene quality and you obviously know how to create good lighting. I will say that I wish some of the lighting caught more on her hair and some of the jewelry on her arms. Also the apple looks a bit flat and I think it would look a bit better and show more of it roundness for lack of a better word, if it were turned slightly and I could see more of the bitten off part.
I don't have much to say because so much here is done so well. The composition is great your color choices are great and the lighting is for me at least the star of the illustration and you execute it very well. Anyways i hope that helps a bit.
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Thanks for your suggestion :hear:
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thanks for sharing your piece in my thread.I love this piece. You have a really good skills for drawing background too
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Love the angle on this piece, its really drawing my eye into the very moment that is occurring. If I might add a slight suggestion, I would perhaps consider widening the shot a bit more to define some more of the surrounding of the characters. 
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Thanks for you suggestion!
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I really like the perspective in this piece, and the movement you have going through it. It leads your eyes to look all around the picture. The cooler color palate really makes the apples stand out. The only suggestion I would make is that the character in the foreground seems a bit more stiff, especially the arm carrying the basket. He just doesn't have the same level of movement and character that the rest of the piece has, for me. But overall it's a really dynamic piece, thank you for sharing it with me!
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Thanks you for your suggestion!! > //// <
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You did a great job with the background and the tilted angle of this piece is perfect!
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Lovely! I love the concept in which one is closer to us than the other, and their poses are amazing! The background and lighting make it so fantasy-like, it's amazing!
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Thanks youuuu //// v \\\\
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This looks great~ Lighting in this picture is beautiful
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