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Published: 2017-01-02 21:40:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 1889; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 10
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Description Raditz is more patient than usual here, but he kind of has to be. Otherwise, Vegeta will have his tail for wasting their time.


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Comments: 12

nataku27 [2017-02-16 18:28:44 +0000 UTC]

Nice story ^^

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ArcanePhotographer [2017-01-13 15:26:30 +0000 UTC]

Oh I just love how this is going, a possible motif for how Gohan might kill Raditz for revenge. Stunning work here, keep it up.

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NickOnPlanetRipple In reply to ArcanePhotographer [2017-01-13 15:29:26 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, I just don't have time to juggle this with my other works.  Here's how the story would've gone, though. I think you'll enjoy it.
My outline for Gohan- Son of EarthFirst, here's the story so far.

Sorry to say, this is where the comic ends, since I don't have time to continue it. I figured I'd take some time out of today, though, to delve into how the rest of the story would've played out.
We'd get a page of Gohan (or rather, Junior) being resistant to his uncle's training, ending with Raditz looking at the almost full moon menacingly. A couple of days later, "Junior" wakes up naked in the ruins of a city that was completely destroyed the night before. He wanders around a bit, traumatized by what he sees, then he hears Raditz' voice. Raditz reveals to him that this was all his doing. Something along the lines of "I was resting peacefully in my cave the whole night. You did this on your own. I'm proud of you." Basically, Raditz woke him up doing the night and kept his eyes pr

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ArcanePhotographer In reply to NickOnPlanetRipple [2017-01-15 20:38:27 +0000 UTC]

Shame but I understand.

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SILENTPHANTOMOMEGA [2017-01-04 03:01:13 +0000 UTC]

that was a moment befitting TeamFourStar

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KaijuDuke [2017-01-03 16:29:56 +0000 UTC]

WOW...Just...Go to hell Raditz, seriously, what a colossal asshole >_<...Even now as he tries to indoctrinate Gohan into the saiyan way, he can't help but be an asshole to him, probably because he relishes having someone weaker than him to boss around since he's at the bottom of the food chain amongst the surviving saiyans. Raditz being a creep aside, I really love how you're handling their facial expressions, from Gohan's rage to Raditz's INSANE face in the fourth panel.

I wonder how long until Gohan figures out that Raditz is desperately trying to cover his own ass before Vegeta arrives, & that Raditz himself is the lowest of the low in their hierarchy, AKA best way to avenge Goku & Piccolo & MAYBE save earth is to surpass Raditz before Vegeta & Nappa arrive, make himself indispensable by comparison & give himself some bargaining power (its a plan at least). 

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NickOnPlanetRipple In reply to KaijuDuke [2017-01-03 16:45:51 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, Raditz throws a fit in Xenoverse 2 once you get stronger than him after the last coupla' training sessions. He drops any vinear of professionalism and starts whining like a child. "Just once, I wanted to have an underling of my own! Just ONCE! THAT'S ALL I WANTED!!"

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KaijuDuke In reply to NickOnPlanetRipple [2017-01-03 19:05:52 +0000 UTC]

LOL, nice, sounds priceless! At any rate, it also bugs me how he calls Gohan a mongrel and looks down on Goku for mating with a human, like, how ELSE is the Saiyan race supposed to survive? I mean come on, unless they stumble across a female saiyan survivor somewhere in the vastness of space the entire species is pretty much doomed to extinction unless they resort to cloning or mating with other alien races, I get that they're proud and arrogant and what not but have they seriously not even considered trying to preserve the species at all in any way, shape, or form? You'd think they'd at least be lonely for companionship once and a while "shrugs" granted, they are spacefaring sociopaths so maybe fighting and killing is really all they need & they're resigned to their eventual fate...That & if I recall many other Freeza Force races don't think highly of saiyans either, at least not those higher in the rankings than them like Freeza and his top officers. 

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NickOnPlanetRipple In reply to KaijuDuke [2017-01-03 19:10:25 +0000 UTC]

Unlike Nappa, he isn't thinking that far ahead.

Seriously, Nappa actually made this point to Vegeta in the original manga. Vegeta brushed it off immediately since they could just become immortal with the dragon balls... and he didn't want a bunch of hybrids scampering around and possibly usurping him one day.

In this scenario, they don't even know about the dragon balls.

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NeckOfSteel [2017-01-02 22:24:29 +0000 UTC]

i don't mean to rush you, but, when will you continue your Devilman series? this year or next?
sorry to ask, i'm just curious on what going to happen.

P.S like what you are doing here, B.T.W

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NickOnPlanetRipple In reply to NeckOfSteel [2017-01-02 22:26:29 +0000 UTC]

I don't know. Just thinking about it fills me with stress.

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NeckOfSteel In reply to NickOnPlanetRipple [2017-01-02 22:27:33 +0000 UTC]

sorry 

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