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EDIT: This is an older version of my Half Dragon player race homebrew, but you can find the updated and final version here:  drive.google.com/file/d/1d-Xqr…


This race is part of my Children of the Dragon project, which you can download here:  www.dmsguild.com/product/33292…

This race is meant to be used along with my revised Dragonborn player race:  drive.google.com/file/d/1-j7NX… which I made because Dragonborn are currently rather weak. So this should bring them up to par with the other races. These two races as well as many other works will be added to my final project, for which Whitemantis will make 6 more works! Here are links to the finished mechanics of those homebrew, as I'm just waiting for Whitemantis to finish the artworks


This was drawn for me by the talented Barelynormalactivity: www.deviantart.com/barelynorma… 

And here is a link to my discord channel: discord.gg/mBmKcp6E3s

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to ??? [2020-07-19 12:30:38 +0000 UTC]

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Tyrannuss555 [2020-04-27 08:56:12 +0000 UTC]

Do you have to be a digital artist to get into dnd publishing?

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to Tyrannuss555 [2020-07-19 12:35:40 +0000 UTC]

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to Tyrannuss555 [2020-06-18 09:50:04 +0000 UTC]

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AsheNightwind [2020-04-20 13:41:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh I love this!
Most of my DM friends are a bit 'purist' in how they play (though one is pretty lenient in letting me play a homebrew bard class after we tweaked it) but I would love to play this race. I love dragons and, while Dragonborns and Kobolds are nice, this is more my jam. And the artwork is stunning.

Please forgive me while I just favorite this and many of your other DnD revised works for future references and much bending of my knees to the almighty DMs

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to AsheNightwind [2020-07-19 12:36:13 +0000 UTC]

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to AsheNightwind [2020-04-25 20:21:05 +0000 UTC]

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TheLOAD [2020-04-19 21:00:45 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I heard you were writing a book of this, and I was wondering when it would be out/where I could find it?

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to TheLOAD [2020-04-25 20:23:40 +0000 UTC]

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TheLOAD In reply to NIELSPETERDEJONG [2020-04-25 22:36:31 +0000 UTC]

Alright!

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to TheLOAD [2020-07-19 12:36:59 +0000 UTC]

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MercenaryX [2020-03-20 07:14:34 +0000 UTC]

I want this as basic info for the game.

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to MercenaryX [2020-07-19 12:37:22 +0000 UTC]

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to MercenaryX [2020-03-22 15:52:20 +0000 UTC]

I would really be flattered if that was to be the case  

Also, I've made a Revised Dragonborn player race as well, in case you are interested:  drive.google.com/file/d/1Kj10m…

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hellbalrog [2020-03-14 18:42:13 +0000 UTC]

Hell... yeah...

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to hellbalrog [2020-07-19 12:37:34 +0000 UTC]

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hellbalrog In reply to NIELSPETERDEJONG [2020-07-19 12:45:51 +0000 UTC]

Damn man, relax sometime 🥳

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to hellbalrog [2020-03-16 07:40:05 +0000 UTC]

Bards man, what you gonna do?

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Lichtenbrands [2020-03-02 19:51:32 +0000 UTC]

While I'm happy that you and Mantis are friends and I'm even more ecstatic that I can share this with my DM and players, I'll admit that the comments here made me wary about posting anything relating to dragon people publicly if people are going to immediately scream "ripoff!" without reading anything or looking at her faq. Its unfair to ask someone to control their fans, but as another fan of hers who doesn't have the benefit of being a friend - I worry what would've happened if you two weren't buddies. Idk, I've just seen several artists through the years get into rough publicity spots because of things like this. I'd hate to see that happen with Mantis, to say nothing of other people feeling as i do and not making dragon stuff public. Maybe Im just being paranoid.


With that heavy stuff said, this is very well put together! The only info we have regarding any kind of half dragon race in dnd is with Kobolds I believe. I always found that strange since Dragons can take humanoid forms and the metallic dragons(silvers notably) are stated to build entire lives with mortals. Im glad to see something like this to fill that info-gap. I also really appreciate you compiling all that dragon info all together! Cuts down all that time page turning and pdf skimming. I especially like the variations you put in regarding racial features between the different flights of dragon. I know that this was intended to be used with the revised dragonborn you made, but can it be used on its own? Honestly, from what I've read of it, your revised dragonborn is a huge improvement of the base game's. But some games keep the amount of homebrew low for balance, my own included. Does playing without the revision leave any kind of power or cultural gap in the world?

Edit: One more question! From one DM to another. Did you place this together yourself? Or is that something that the GMBinder has a feature for? I've been trying to find a way to keep my stuff together in a neat and tidy fashion that still fits the theme of dnd's books.

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to Lichtenbrands [2020-07-19 12:38:22 +0000 UTC]

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to Lichtenbrands [2020-03-04 09:05:17 +0000 UTC]

Well don't worry too much, as long as you don't let them get to you then they will often quit. Outrage and cancel culture is sadly the norm for many, who are deep down just trying to bully. Just do what you want, and weather the storm. You will come out stronger in the end, I can promise you  

And yes, I put it all together I did get help from a friend, and I did use his base template in GMbinder. 

In fact, this player race is meant to be used together with my Revised Dragonborn player race, so that Dragonborn players will not be left behind. Whitemantis is currently making the art for it, but I already have the base ready if you are interested:  www.gmbinder.com/share/-LpUnq-…

I gave them more bestial traits, so that you can choose between the more humanoid Half Dragons, and the more bestial Dragonborn  

Also, here is a combination of all the lore that I could find:  www.gmbinder.com/share/-LtLZ9K… it also goes a bit more into detail about what differences there are between the Dragonborn and Half Dragon races.

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AmaDenchArt [2020-03-01 19:04:25 +0000 UTC]

For anyone worrying about this being a ripoff of my work: don't worry! I'm very grateful that you think of me and worry about my work being unfairled used, it means a lot. Niels and I are friends, and his half-dragon race is indeed inspired by my own dragons. At first he used my art for his book, but I asked him to not use it and he complied with my request. He then commissioned an artist to illustrate his book for him.

I am currently working with him to illustrate his new book, with his own version of half-dragon people.

I do not claim ownership of half-dragon characters - that would be crazy and nonsense! Dragon people existed far before I created my characters!

In fact I encourage people to create their own races and worlds, if they feel inspired my work.

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to AmaDenchArt [2020-03-01 20:01:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your comment to clarify this I guess your fans just got a bit over protective XD

Thanks again for inspiring all of this!

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AmaDenchArt In reply to NIELSPETERDEJONG [2020-03-01 20:20:24 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad they worry about my work. ^^ But yeah, just a little misunderstanding! XD

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ThorinWolfson [2020-03-01 18:50:58 +0000 UTC]

I skimmed over it just now, but I think I like it.


This would be of interest to me, but may I ask a question?

How works DMsGuild?

I wanted to get some of the things there for some time now, but can't find anywhere how DMsGuild works.

I have to create an account there, but then what? Is it free, or is there a monthly/yearly member fee?


Sorry, if I'm bothering.

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to ThorinWolfson [2020-03-01 19:39:40 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry, you are not bothering Just make an account, which is free to do, and you can then link it to an account if you want to pay.

However, I believe that you don't have to, because in some cases you can also choose to pay what you want. So in my case you could type in 0, and you can get the HD file for free

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ThorinWolfson In reply to NIELSPETERDEJONG [2020-03-02 21:04:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

Again, this looks awesome.

I think, I'll maybe use this in a campaign I'm plannin at the moment, if that's okay.

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to ThorinWolfson [2020-07-19 12:40:23 +0000 UTC]

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to ThorinWolfson [2020-03-04 09:07:32 +0000 UTC]

Sure! You are most welcome This is meant to be used in combination with my Revised Kobold  www.gmbinder.com/share/-Lxb9n_… and Revised Dragonborn  www.gmbinder.com/share/-LpUnq-… player races, so that those two races would not feel left behind.



And if you are interested, here is a link to all the Draconic lore that I could find for these races:  www.gmbinder.com/share/-LtLZ9K… Which also highlights the differences and original of both the Dragonborn and Half Dragons.

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Doukz [2020-03-01 18:31:46 +0000 UTC]

Dang people are getting a bit... mad over this? It's all for fun, look at how much work went into this! The art, the clearly well thought out traits and history-

I just really hate to see such a cool idea get filled with nothing but "yeah no ripoff lol" when there's only so much you can do to make dragon people different from each other, and the creator of the Varanar species encourages other dragon people anyways!

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to Doukz [2020-07-19 12:40:31 +0000 UTC]

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to Doukz [2020-03-01 20:01:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm really flattered to hear that Whitemantis is my friend, and already cleared up a few things fortunately ^^

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LegionGUA [2020-03-01 17:54:00 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thank you for posting this. It really cleared up my question on whether or not you can have both the traits of a variant human as well as those of a Half-dragon. I may or may not have been trying to create a halfdragon with some flight capacity using the LoM Starspawn feat. Time to rewrite Rein.

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to LegionGUA [2020-03-01 20:02:01 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome I hope you will have fun with them!

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LegionGUA In reply to NIELSPETERDEJONG [2020-03-01 20:05:25 +0000 UTC]

Dat is de bedoeling. ^_^

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to LegionGUA [2020-07-19 12:40:46 +0000 UTC]

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to LegionGUA [2020-03-04 09:08:25 +0000 UTC]

Glad to hear it! This is meant to be used in combination with my Revised Kobold  www.gmbinder.com/share/-Lxb9n_… and Revised Dragonborn  www.gmbinder.com/share/-LpUnq-… player races, so that those two races would not feel left behind.


And if you are interested, here is a link to all the Draconic lore that I could find for these races:  www.gmbinder.com/share/-LtLZ9K… Which also highlights the differences and original of both the Dragonborn and Half Dragons.

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victorialampini [2020-03-01 15:53:34 +0000 UTC]

I make dragon people, too. 

My design is a lot different than this, though.

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to victorialampini [2020-03-01 20:02:20 +0000 UTC]

They remind me of the Dragonborn I also made a revised version for them:  www.gmbinder.com/share/-LpUnq-…

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victorialampini In reply to NIELSPETERDEJONG [2020-03-01 20:11:59 +0000 UTC]

That description is pretty cool! 

What is it for? A dungeons and dragons game?

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to victorialampini [2020-03-02 12:06:43 +0000 UTC]

Yes, and I made this Homebrew for other players

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victorialampini In reply to NIELSPETERDEJONG [2020-03-02 14:52:53 +0000 UTC]

Cool!

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to victorialampini [2020-07-19 12:40:53 +0000 UTC]

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uberfrill14 [2020-03-01 15:50:33 +0000 UTC]

To anyone saying this is too similar to White-Mantis's Varanar, I feel like you're worrying too much. Not only did she say that she still wants people to flex their creativity and create their own dragonfolk, I feel like this instance has enough differences anyway, such as the fact that this race seems to live in a more fantasy styled world instead of one inspired by the ice ages. The breath attack and dragon form are especially different, since Mantis has made it clear that her characters cannot transform into dragons and don't have any sort of dragonbreath. Not to mention that Mantis is FAR from the first to make a popular dragonfolk race. Besides, I'm sure Mantis would find this particular half-dragon race to be freakin' awesome. I know I do. XD

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to uberfrill14 [2020-07-19 12:40:58 +0000 UTC]

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to uberfrill14 [2020-03-01 20:03:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Whitemantis already commented to clear things up, and they are indeed based on the Dragon races from Dungeons & Dragons. 

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Princess-Lil [2020-03-01 14:03:08 +0000 UTC]

Did you know that, in general, female lizards are significantly bigger than male lizards? I'm definitely not still salty about au'ra. D: Balance wise, pretty neat. Breath weapon is a little strong in comparison to what other races get. It runs pretty counter to a lot of previous DnD lore, though, and I kind of suggest looking at various half-dragon templates to get a kind of feeling. Though, the half-dragon template was always OP as heck so eh.


Also, people claiming too many similarities to other dragon people -- gosh. There's dragons of similar designs dating back to the 90s. Breath of Fire IV prominently featured dragon-human hybrid forms. Some weird hentai featured them. They gained a lot of popularity within anime spaces as "dragonewts" in the early 10s thanks to Monster Musume. Other good example I can think of is the Gria from Tactics Advanced, various anthropomorphized versions of Monster Hunter wyverns -- just. In short, anyone trying to "claim" a half-dragon design is uh. No.



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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to Princess-Lil [2020-07-19 12:41:06 +0000 UTC]

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to Princess-Lil [2020-03-04 09:08:58 +0000 UTC]

This Half Dragon player race is meant to be used in combination with my Revised Kobold  www.gmbinder.com/share/-Lxb9n_… and Revised Dragonborn  www.gmbinder.com/share/-LpUnq-… player races, so that those two races would not feel left behind.


And if you are interested, here is a link to all the Draconic lore that I could find for these races:  www.gmbinder.com/share/-LtLZ9K… Which also highlights the differences and original of both the Dragonborn and Half Dragons.

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NIELSPETERDEJONG In reply to Princess-Lil [2020-03-01 20:07:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh, and I've also made a revised Dragonborn to go with them, seeing as the standard Dragonborn has a race score of 4.5 compared to the 8 of the Dwarf:

www.gmbinder.com/share/-LpUnq-…

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