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LOVE STORY( NO ONE CAN LOVE YOU MORE THEN THIS)
knock knock on the door.
dylan answers.
Dylan: Oh hello Alice how are you?
Alice: Oh I'm good thanks would you like to come for a walk in the forest with me?
Dylan: sure thing i'll just ask mum
........................................................................ silence...........................................................................
Dylan: Ok I'm good to go I got some snacks to
Dylan smiles and closes the door and they start walking.
Alice: its such a lovely day don't you think Dylan??
Dylan: Yes it is very lovely, much like yourself.
Alice giggles
Alice: Oh Dylan your flatering, but there is somethings i wanted to ask you thats why i wanted to go for a walk.
Dylan: Oh? and what would they be??
Alice: Let us get to our favourite spot first
Alice and Dylan walk for 15 minutes in silence, with just the crumbling of the leaves under there feet
Dylan: Ok we are here
Alice: Its so beautiful here
Alice and Dylan place a rug on the ground laying down next to each other eating some biskets. Alice sits up and leans over Dylan.
Alice: Do I ever cross your mind?
Dylan: No
Alice: Do you like me?
Dylan:No
Alice
o you want me?Dylan:No
Alice: Would you cry if I left?
Dylan:No
Alice: Would you do anything for me?
Dylan:No
Alice: Choose me or your life
Dylan: My life
Alice runs away in hurt pain and devestation, Dylan runs after her and trips over a log breacking his arm. screaming in pain he yells for Alice to come back.
Alice hearing his screams run to his aid.
Dylan: Alice please listen to me i was not finished just listen to me.
Alice calms down and listens while helping Dylan to his feet so they can get back to town.
Dylan: Alice the reason why you don't cross my mind is beacuase your always on my mind.
Alice gose to speack but Dylan kisses her,
Dylan: I'm not finished. The reason why i don't like you is beacuase i love you with all my heart, the reason why i don't want you is beacuase i need you more then anything in the world. The reason why i wouldn't cry if you left is becuase i would die if you left, becuase ide have nothing to live for. The reason why I'm not willing to do anything for you is becuase i would do everything for you and The reason why i choose my life is becuase you are my life.
............................................................................ silence ........................................................................
Alice: Oh Dylan i love you to, and i want to be with you forever
wraping her arms around him kissing him so deeply.
Alice: we must get you into hospital,
just reaching the curve of the road to the hospital, Dylan colapes and faints........
Alice screams for help people rush to his side and takes him away.
( to be continued)
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Comments: 4
You have the potentialwith this to make a pretty decent script, though it does need some help with spelling and grammar. As far as an actually book goes, I'd say that this has a very long way to go to get to novel form, though it's nearly the right form fo a scpt as it is.
Overall, it's not bd, if you see it as a movie instead of try to read it as a book. ^^ My advice to you reguarding this piece would be to finish it completely and then put it together as a movie. Show us the work instead of trying to tell us. ^^
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thank you again i think, umm i really do not know were im going to take this but ill do more wheni have the time becuase im in middle of 2 weeks studi right now. ummm idk about a movie i dout i could make one, and as for drawing more things im no drawer the pic ive done was u flook
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You could deffinately make a good script for a movie, just continueing off what you have here.
Or maybe a soap opera.
It would be fairly low-budget but you could probably get people in your community to learn how to act. For a romance for tragedy, as long as you work with the scenery you have, you could probably pull off a fairly decent movie. *nodnod*
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thanks, but my aims arnt that high im just here to put stuff up and see how things turn out, as for my poems there just rimes put together, apart from one of them
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