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Nightclaws In reply to THEMANSHARK [2009-06-09 00:21:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for the comments and the fav ^_^
I was making sure I didn't use the words "Fall from Grace."
I thought it wouldn't work, if he's falling from grace, what's graceful about his current position.
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THEMANSHARK In reply to Nightclaws [2009-06-09 00:37:59 +0000 UTC]
heh, its kind of interesting; the drama troop I'm in is doing a few scenes from the musical Children Of Eden where God cast out Adam and Eve from the garden.
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Nightclaws In reply to THEMANSHARK [2010-02-01 23:16:15 +0000 UTC]
Oh, it's been a while since I read these comments, though that sounds really cool. Why I didn't put that before I don't know xD
How did it go?
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4thWarmasterKais [2009-06-08 14:36:13 +0000 UTC]
Maybe it's an angelic crossbow that looks like a gun? XD
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Nightclaws In reply to 4thWarmasterKais [2009-09-23 12:31:29 +0000 UTC]
Nah, I specifically wanted the gun because I figured that the idea of these things were imprinted in our bodies from somewhere.
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4thWarmasterKais [2009-06-08 14:35:34 +0000 UTC]
Wow. That's very well written. I only say that at the beggining you refer to God without a capital at one point, but I think that it is a good story!
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Nightclaws In reply to 4thWarmasterKais [2009-06-08 15:42:59 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for feedback ^_^
I'll edit that 'God' bit in a few.
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