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Published: 2008-10-19 00:47:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 10803; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 84
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Description ok...this is the first page of the narusaku doujin i said i would make.. and YES I KNOW IT REALLY DOESNT LOOK THAT GREAT, AND IM ONLY MAKING IT WITH PENCILS AND MARKERS, AND I DONT HAVE MUCH EXPERIENCE WITH MAKING COMICS!, AND IM HORRIBLE AT DRAWING FEET AND BACKGROUNDS SO PLEASE IGNORE THEM!! XD

this is also the very first time i draw tsunade and shizune... actually, other that naruto and sakura, it will be the first time i draw any of the characters

well, the first page probably doesnt look very interesting, but i hope it gets better^^ its just cuz i know whats coming next, but i just hope you guys dont get bored of it after you read the first page XD

anyway, its begun! and i will have page 2 up soon

and yes, i know i didint post the cover... thats cuz its not ready yet >< i started the doujin before i made the cover and i only just finished sketching it out^^

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ok, i can see now that the text isnt very visible, so here:

1st bubble: Shizune, what did you say his condition was?

2nd bubble: Nothing critical, he just collapsed earlier with a
high fever...

- an yeah thats it for page 1 XD ill be sure to make the text more visible next time, GOMEN! >.<

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Comments: 9

poooy200 [2011-04-11 02:46:21 +0000 UTC]

Woops, just noticed "ill be sure to make the text more visible next time".Sorry.

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poooy200 [2011-04-11 02:45:16 +0000 UTC]

This looks really good, but I have to go right up to the screen to see the words(so far).

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abhardrock [2008-10-23 00:06:31 +0000 UTC]

A new doujin! Can't wait for more.

Just letting you know that the text is awfully small, well for me that is.

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Celious [2008-10-20 07:36:39 +0000 UTC]

They look pretty good ^^ and your feet are very well drawn too !! This is a great first page! I wonder what will happen next

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hellguard777 [2008-10-19 18:27:20 +0000 UTC]

This looks good. Just make sure to make the letter a little bigger. If you make them a little smaller I'll have to press my face to the computer screen to read the text xD.

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NightLiight In reply to hellguard777 [2008-10-19 23:32:44 +0000 UTC]

yeah i hear ya XD i already made the letters for page 2 bigger, hopefully, big enough >.<'

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narutofan12736 [2008-10-19 03:22:30 +0000 UTC]

awesome looking forward to the doujin

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zannen0 [2008-10-19 03:16:27 +0000 UTC]

Sweet! Looking forward to your doujin!

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6Blazikengirl9 [2008-10-19 03:14:09 +0000 UTC]

nice!! this looks awesomee so far keep it up, i can't wait to see more XD

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