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Nightrain82 — My Love
Published: 2010-11-22 18:51:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 425; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 3
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Description I give my heart
I take the risk
Sometimes it breaks
I must admit

You know I love you
Deep down you do
So don't ever question
As my heart it's true

I'm not the best
I'm not the worst
It's what I am
It's all I'm worth

So stick with me
Through thick and thin
I'll treat you right
I'll never sin

You play my Queen
I'll play your King
I'll build your castle
For us to live in

Now take my crown
Wear it with pride
For the world to see
No longer our love will hide

So hold my hand honey
We'll give it a shot
Together forever baby
No more being apart
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Comments: 14

kallia-goldenwings [2011-05-13 20:49:28 +0000 UTC]

I just loved how this pieces rhyms

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Nightrain82 In reply to kallia-goldenwings [2011-05-17 00:53:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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QyJx [2011-05-13 00:20:10 +0000 UTC]

How cute. I really like the rhyme scheme.

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Nightrain82 In reply to QyJx [2011-05-13 00:36:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it

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JamesBondPants [2010-12-29 19:25:56 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful
I can't wait to be your sister in law

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Nightrain82 In reply to JamesBondPants [2010-12-30 16:31:06 +0000 UTC]

Aww why thank you Miss Sophstation


And i can't wait either!!!

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JamesBondPants In reply to Nightrain82 [2010-12-30 20:44:28 +0000 UTC]

Very welcome David


It shall be much fun

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Nightrain82 In reply to JamesBondPants [2011-01-06 18:43:59 +0000 UTC]

Much fun indeed

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JamesBondPants In reply to Nightrain82 [2011-01-11 18:59:31 +0000 UTC]

!

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CharlieDoryRose [2010-11-22 19:10:10 +0000 UTC]

I love you too.

You know how much already I like this, as a way of representing feelings in the present but also hopes for the future.

You don't have to worry honey, we'll have our castle one day.

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Nightrain82 In reply to CharlieDoryRose [2010-11-22 19:57:30 +0000 UTC]

I do indeed my dear, i am just really glad you liked it! you know how nervous i am about showing you anything that i have written for you.

And we shall definately have our castle and it will be made out of Bourbon biscuits as i promised you hehe
x

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CharlieDoryRose In reply to Nightrain82 [2010-11-22 21:12:06 +0000 UTC]

It better had be! I've been waiting years for my Bourbon Biscuit castle.

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Nightrain82 In reply to CharlieDoryRose [2010-12-09 18:27:59 +0000 UTC]

Yarse and how patient you have been

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CharlieDoryRose In reply to Nightrain82 [2010-12-09 22:20:48 +0000 UTC]

You know it.

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