Comments: 15
Leda456 [2016-05-20 16:22:33 +0000 UTC]
I hope you had enough time to get ready for this comment XD
Because i have so many things to say!
I don't even know where to start!
Maybe the first thing i should say is DAAAAMN, this comic is awesome!
You improved a lot, in such a short time *O*
Especially with the anatomy and shading.
Let me go panel by panel:
I love the pose on the first panel. It's totally natural, and anatomically accurate. Like the way he sits, leans forward a bit, and gazes at the landscape is absolutely authentic.
Also i love the bright blue effect behind him, which is on the second panel too.
You really improved in doing the lighing! I love how the blue light illuminates the grass as Sans appears. I also love how you made the text, you have a very pretty handwriting X3
But the third and fourth panel (along with the 7th, but be patient, i will talk about that too)!
These panles really show how much you improved in drawing faces. The way Jack looks up at the stars on the 3dr panel really shows his emotions. You captured the facial expressions perfectly!
On the 5th panel, i noticed something:
I LOVE how you paid attention to make Sans's face brighter when he looks at the phone, then, on the 6th panel, the phone's light illuminates his fingers.
Its a very nice detail, that makes it so much more realistic and authentic~
I loves Jack's expression on the 7th panel X3 This 10 million was a real surprise, huh? The shading on the face is also very nice btw
And awww, the 8th panel just melted my heart <3
Just like the last, big panel. I love silhouettes, and this panel is a perceft ending for this short story.
Now, let me tell you what i love about this comic in general:
The way you separate the panels. I love how you used the last panel as a base, and did not use frames.
also, the sky, and the lights and shadows. You really improved! I'm impressed!
Congratiluations to him, and to YOU, for making such an awesome comic
Keep up the fabulous work!
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CuteKawaiiCute [2016-05-18 11:59:35 +0000 UTC]
that's awesome! great job
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LumenBlurb [2016-05-18 11:06:08 +0000 UTC]
Cool.
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CupCakesRbae [2016-05-18 10:20:46 +0000 UTC]
Aww I love this!
Congrats to him!
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BriBriGaming [2016-05-17 21:07:41 +0000 UTC]
OMG I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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