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Niimble — A day in my shoes ~

Published: 2013-03-22 22:51:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 810; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 0
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Description Inspired by the poem by Denis E. Manuel ~

Would you like to walk a day in my shoes?
Where the world isn't full of many hues
Just the color of darkness
So dark that you can’t see a light
And you’ve just about given up the fight

Days filled with loneliness
And lots of pain
It’s enough to drive anyone insane
How would you like to walk a day in my shoes?

Days where you don’t hear those 3 little words,
I Love You
Or if you do
You don’t think it’s true

How about when you aren't seen for 3 or 4 days
And nobody calls to see if you’re okay

What about the days that you have to go to work
And have to pretend that everything is okay
But you’re wishing that the days would just pass
Adding more years to your life
And hoping it’ll soon end
How would you like to walk a day in my shoes?

How would you like to NOT feel loved
Knowing that there will never be
A releasing of doves
That symbolizes that 4 letter word
And knowing that you’re not being heard

Feeling like a hollow pecan shell
When it’s cracked
There’s nothing inside
That’s how I feel most days
Like an empty space
Anyone care to take my place
Just for a day?

But I do have 1 or 2 days that I’m happy
Just because
I know when I get to the other side
I’ll see those doves
And that’s when I’ll feel loved

So you see
Walking in my shoes ain't all bad
When I think about
What will be had…
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Comments: 17

Pajunen [2013-08-07 15:23:09 +0000 UTC]

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Niimble In reply to Pajunen [2013-08-07 18:55:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! That's very kind of you!

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Pajunen In reply to Niimble [2013-08-08 08:33:15 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure!

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petrova [2013-07-08 23:33:39 +0000 UTC]

I think this is a beautiful ID, it says something about you without being a cliché photo of you

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Niimble In reply to petrova [2013-07-09 01:24:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for your support! It's very kind of you!

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petrova In reply to Niimble [2013-07-09 01:31:45 +0000 UTC]

Keep up the good work

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Niimble In reply to petrova [2013-07-09 01:43:02 +0000 UTC]

I will!

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Beauty-Elevates [2013-05-29 03:31:20 +0000 UTC]

I love this picture, the colors and angle of the camera add a nice feel to the image, along with the poem to add more details, it is a great piece.

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Niimble In reply to Beauty-Elevates [2013-05-29 20:37:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, I really appreciate that. Soon, I'll be uploading some new pieces I've taken. I've been practicing my photography skills, so hopefully they have improved. Again, thank you so much!

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Beauty-Elevates In reply to Niimble [2013-05-30 00:41:26 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure, I am glad you are improving your skills hopefully I fall in love with your other pieces as well. (:

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Niimble In reply to Beauty-Elevates [2013-05-31 01:04:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so incredibly much! I hope you like them.

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02Aya [2013-03-23 23:23:24 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. I really like the composition for this photo, and the poem adds to the already strong emotional pull. I really like it! XD

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Niimble In reply to 02Aya [2013-03-24 16:12:57 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thanks! I wasn't really sure if many other deviants would like it since it's a little amateur-ish. Still, thank you soooo much! It really means a lot.

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Pixietira [2013-03-22 22:54:04 +0000 UTC]

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Niimble In reply to Pixietira [2013-03-22 22:59:45 +0000 UTC]

I take it you like it?

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Pixietira In reply to Pixietira [2013-03-22 22:56:57 +0000 UTC]

snapplause,loved the poem and the picture is taken at the perfect moment for it! Well done!

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Niimble In reply to Pixietira [2013-03-24 17:26:58 +0000 UTC]

Awwww! That's so sweet of you! Thank you so much!!

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