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Nikolai-Kalahan In reply to Shearkin [2014-09-01 23:19:42 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, been trying to keep close, but when you can't watch the movie on demand, it's kinda tricky.
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Nikolai-Kalahan In reply to Shearkin [2014-09-02 02:49:14 +0000 UTC]
Now Dragon Booster, that's easy. I have the whole series downloaded on my laptop and everything. But HTTYD 2?
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DarkenedSoul12 [2014-07-31 15:56:42 +0000 UTC]
Aw this as amazing! Next chapter!
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Alairis [2014-07-25 14:21:47 +0000 UTC]
I liked this quite a bit. There was a strong need to point out the spelling errors but I see someone has already done that. So I'm just going to nitpick at some of your diction.
But now, peace returned to the bowl of dragons.
I don't know about you, but the use of "bowl" seems really out of place here. It doesn't fit the tone you're trying to set, and its rather inelegant when the reader is imagining the plethora of dragons in the beautiful nest we see in the second movie.
Otherwise, I enjoyed this. I see from my googling (I deleted this from my watch messages and closed the tab before I realized I hadn't commented) that its also on ff. I might add this to my follow list when I head over there later today.
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YoshiDreamExplorer [2014-07-25 14:03:04 +0000 UTC]
Aw baby toothless was a hiccup too! XD
Nice story
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Nikolai-Kalahan In reply to VoadorChama [2014-07-25 23:12:13 +0000 UTC]
**reads your pointed out errors and mutter-shouts "Goddammit!" each time** Whoops! I already saw two other errors that I fixed, but dang it, two more eluded me. Ah well, live and learn. I had a feeling, though, when I wrote that fainted/feigned sleeping bit, I was thinking of the right word but putting the wrong one in. Gosh dang it. X3
It's quite possible they visit regularly, yeah. But not only that, they're stealthy Night Furies, so even if a dragon had been awake to see them, it probably wouldn't have seen much. Eh, regardless, thanks for liking it! And I've had that issue with wanting to praise something and fearing repeating myself. hehehehe
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