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Published: 2018-06-26 00:20:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 532; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 0
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Description I know the lips look a little weird but everything else I love.

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Pencil for sketch
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Prismacolors

EDIT: Fixed camera quality
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Comments: 17

Solidus-Skully [2018-06-30 16:43:57 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully designed, really love the mystical look of her character design.

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NikyleProductions In reply to Solidus-Skully [2018-06-30 16:50:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! But the character and the design came from the game "Paladins". I'm simply just making fan art of it.

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chaomonandos [2018-06-30 13:37:05 +0000 UTC]

Hello! I found your piece on

 

This is a really nice ilustration, I do like the composition, colors and the sketch lines in general.

One thing I noticed is the relation between the arms. I think that her left arm has a nice size, there´s no problem with that one. But the right one is a little to big and chunky.

I understand it´s position requires that its bigger than the left one, but anyway, it is too much. It should be a little smaller. I suggest you to practise proportions with real figures, just to understand them, even if your style is not realistic.

And about the lips, they are a little weird because there to big but otherwise the lips give it an interesting look in general.

Also, there are some areas that I would make darker, such as the inside part of the hair.

The overall look of the armor looks very good.

The mixture of blue, red and gold fits always. It also reminds me a little bit of wonder woman.

The shading is pretty basic but does what it should do. Also the shadow in the back gives the pic a nice touch.

Nice piece Hope this helps!

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NikyleProductions In reply to chaomonandos [2018-06-30 15:43:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the critique! I'll keep that in mind in future projects.

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adam-ant2 [2018-06-30 12:52:18 +0000 UTC]

Watch out for the lian!  

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NikyleProductions In reply to adam-ant2 [2018-06-30 15:44:14 +0000 UTC]

Nice one.

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theJfluffy [2018-06-30 10:12:18 +0000 UTC]

The use of primary colors is fantastic!

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NikyleProductions In reply to theJfluffy [2018-06-30 15:39:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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lionclaw1 [2018-06-30 07:24:14 +0000 UTC]

Hello, i found your art on

First of all, there is a problem with the perspective, not with the character but with the whole image,. I really recommend you to use a scanner that taking a photo. It's really worth to spend some money in a scanner.

Since the picture is slightly distorted, it isn't easy to say what or if there is something wrong with the hips. But what i can tell is that the thumb of the left hand is too long. also try to make the wrist a bit smaller.

The colors are well chosen and fit together. The coloring is really good. The eyes are very magnetic and catches the eye of the beholder. But look that you draw the reflections at the same level. The rest of the reflections are very good and give the picture the necessary shine. Oh you missed the reflections on the earrings, but I almost didn't notice.

So I just can say keep up the good work and I hope to see more from you.

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NikyleProductions In reply to lionclaw1 [2018-06-30 07:36:56 +0000 UTC]

Omg I missed the shine on the earrings! Thank you for pointing that out. Also I can't buy a scanner because I'm just 13 but I will look in to it and see what the cheapest scanner is. Thank you for the critique!

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lionclaw1 In reply to NikyleProductions [2018-06-30 07:50:48 +0000 UTC]

Scanners aren't that expensive these days, ask your parents I really hope they are going to support your hobby, there is really much
potential (I hope this is the right wort in english) in your art. There are also very good books about how to draw, like the how to draw manga series. You can also find some good tutorials online.

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NikyleProductions In reply to lionclaw1 [2018-06-30 08:00:04 +0000 UTC]

K cool. My parents have always been supporting me so they might.

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DesenhoExperiment [2018-06-30 07:10:31 +0000 UTC]

Hello from “iconProjectComment”:

Being honest, the lips are alright for me, they just a little big, now to everything else, you choose as the main colors blue, red and gold, I like how most of her clothes are red but there are touch of blues on her belt and boots, but what I really like is how creative this dress of her really is, she looks good on it, her blue eyes also combines with her pale white skin and red lips, going back to the colors, gold gives her a somewhat royal fell to it thanks to the combination with that bizarre dress of hers, one good thing about gold is that it fits very well with blue and red. About that gun she is holding thought, it doesn’t look that bad, but I can’t see the trigger on her finger, and one of her eyes, the one on the left, looks to be in front of her hair, instead of behind it, I can’t say anything about the anatomy because it is a cartoon and there is nothing really that bad about her body for me to point out, i just wish her skin and her hair had diferent colors instead of pure white. Your art is really good, and I fell like there is not too much I could help you with, so I did my best here.


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NikyleProductions In reply to DesenhoExperiment [2018-06-30 07:25:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! The skin is like that because I ran out of skin colors and I only have a brown skin tone so that's why it's "pure white" lol. But thank you for the feedback!

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LexieMorgan [2018-06-30 06:49:29 +0000 UTC]

I love it

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NikyleProductions In reply to LexieMorgan [2018-06-30 07:30:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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LexieMorgan In reply to NikyleProductions [2018-06-30 08:20:12 +0000 UTC]

No problem!  

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