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Nimbue — his climate by-nc-nd
Published: 2017-04-23 02:17:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 631; Favourites: 61; Downloads: 0
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Description you keep the south so wet with rain
a dopplar radar, color stain
a flying
weathervane
blue flooding sky
pale raging plain
a flying
weathervane

tornado spark, cloud cracking hiss
raindancing in an airless bliss
2 terajoules,
a kiss
his wind is forcing
by the wrist
2 terajoules,
a kiss

a drink for T, a thunderbee
in autumn, storm cameraderie
tsunami
silently
bruised port unfurl
quakes grip on me
tsunami
silently
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Comments: 8

Semety [2018-07-18 01:57:01 +0000 UTC]

I like the subtlety. 

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KellySeale [2018-02-22 20:25:00 +0000 UTC]

I picked up on the erotica first line. And again, this affects me in a good way. Brings me there, within your words.

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Nimbue In reply to KellySeale [2018-02-22 20:26:58 +0000 UTC]

Heh, yeah...I opened with a strong line to set the sexual tone...if that line were eliminated I'm not sure everyone would pick up on it  ^_^  Thanks so much love, your comments are always so appreciated     

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KellySeale In reply to Nimbue [2018-02-25 03:52:55 +0000 UTC]

You're so very welcome. Always.
Kelly

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mwexplorer [2017-08-10 12:31:41 +0000 UTC]

I think it's a beautiful writing......the erotica is not so obvious, well-cloaked......but as someone that enjoys the traditional form & structure in poetry, the various types of weather and some erotica, I like this

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intimeofplagues [2017-04-23 02:26:51 +0000 UTC]

Soft is the building cascade of fluid exuberance from whispers in showers to cries of unending vortexes,
never ending, the pulse and flow of needs for air and to course the writhing pale soft skies of spectral glamour,
releasing once more in the drive and imminent apex of the giant Cumulus front building desires and senses.

love it!

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Nimbue In reply to intimeofplagues [2017-04-23 03:34:56 +0000 UTC]

  

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intimeofplagues In reply to Nimbue [2017-04-23 04:13:26 +0000 UTC]

 

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