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Published: 2010-04-16 03:09:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 1567; Favourites: 93; Downloads: 0
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Description Side story of my webcomic Neotica that I did for a manga class at my school. We were supposed to do only 4 pages but somehow mine ended up as 8 pages OTL I hope I did well

I'm not that good at storytelling/plot creation (sappy plot /wrists), so this was an interesting challenge for me. I'm still learning so I would love to get pointers on this about paneling, scene selection, and such ;u; Basically things I could consider improving upon or trying in the future.

Oi btw sorry for the spam of pages ;u;

COVER PAGE BEGIN READING >>>
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Comments: 39

LoluKomiya [2010-04-20 20:39:11 +0000 UTC]

Wow! That's awesome! Great artwork!

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niolynn In reply to LoluKomiya [2010-04-21 06:07:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! <333

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lorain05 [2010-04-17 13:59:01 +0000 UTC]

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niolynn In reply to lorain05 [2010-04-17 18:43:37 +0000 UTC]

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lorain05 In reply to niolynn [2010-04-18 05:41:22 +0000 UTC]

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TheMsmadcookie [2010-04-17 08:49:55 +0000 UTC]

Wow!

your art really cute. XD
I simply love them.

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niolynn In reply to TheMsmadcookie [2010-04-17 18:43:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much ;u;

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TheMsmadcookie In reply to niolynn [2010-04-17 19:28:07 +0000 UTC]

no problem ^^

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Piece5113 [2010-04-17 01:38:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh *A* /melts

They look beautiful *v* I am going to go and read the rest of the story now

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niolynn In reply to Piece5113 [2010-04-17 02:32:50 +0000 UTC]

Omg I'm glad you like /hugggg *U*

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KumoriNinja08 [2010-04-16 22:57:03 +0000 UTC]

Ooo sensual ouo<333

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niolynn In reply to KumoriNinja08 [2010-04-17 02:31:30 +0000 UTC]

hehe thanks <33

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KumoriNinja08 In reply to niolynn [2010-04-17 02:45:38 +0000 UTC]

np^^

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canavisterminal [2010-04-16 21:22:53 +0000 UTC]

nice

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niolynn In reply to canavisterminal [2010-04-17 02:29:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Sweet-Aziian-Giirl [2010-04-16 17:59:03 +0000 UTC]

really like the draw and the color !!! >_<

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niolynn In reply to Sweet-Aziian-Giirl [2010-04-17 02:29:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you <333

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Sweet-Aziian-Giirl In reply to niolynn [2010-04-17 15:17:06 +0000 UTC]

ya welcome !! x)

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Coconut-Thief [2010-04-16 12:06:15 +0000 UTC]

QAQ WHAT I DIDN'T KNOW IT WAS GURNA BEH SAAAD. BAWWWWWW. TAT Such gorgeous artwork and set-up. The background especially lewked awesome. This cover-page is so gorgeous. -touchtouch-

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niolynn In reply to Coconut-Thief [2010-04-17 02:30:22 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry ;u;

Thank you so much *A* <3333

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Lolitadynamo [2010-04-16 12:03:58 +0000 UTC]

Omg. So pretty.
Its got a very alluring feeling to it.
Great job!

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niolynn In reply to Lolitadynamo [2010-04-17 02:30:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you dear <333

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ChiNoMiko [2010-04-16 08:14:48 +0000 UTC]

i really like the girl's expression.
I havent read it, but so far the pages look very nice too!

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niolynn In reply to ChiNoMiko [2010-04-17 02:32:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Chino <333 /hug

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Lilbang [2010-04-16 05:09:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I"m so excited! *is reading now*

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niolynn In reply to Lilbang [2010-04-17 02:30:43 +0000 UTC]

<3333

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ShinigamiMiroku [2010-04-16 04:11:55 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. No other words can describe them, their bond.

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niolynn In reply to ShinigamiMiroku [2010-04-16 20:16:23 +0000 UTC]

<333 I'm glad you can feel the emotion ;u;

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ShinigamiMiroku In reply to niolynn [2010-04-16 21:01:50 +0000 UTC]

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Miranda-H [2010-04-16 04:08:12 +0000 UTC]

So nice! <333 Im excited to read this Nio

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niolynn In reply to Miranda-H [2010-04-16 20:16:59 +0000 UTC]

lol it's not that good, but I'm still learning

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CaptainClock12 [2010-04-16 03:36:24 +0000 UTC]

I didn't know there was such a thing as a Manga class in school (unless you live in Tokyo, Japan that is ) because here in America there is no such thing as a Manga class (at least not that I'm aware of considering that for it to be considered a manga it would have had to have been written in Japan originally otherwise it's called a comic book.)

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niolynn In reply to CaptainClock12 [2010-04-16 05:17:33 +0000 UTC]

it doesnt have to be written in Japan to be manga. It need to be written in the manga-style to be a manga. The physical location of where it is drawn does not matter <:

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CaptainClock12 In reply to niolynn [2010-04-16 18:12:53 +0000 UTC]

Well I was always told otherwise.

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ShiningAngel [2010-04-16 03:30:59 +0000 UTC]

OMG I love this!
Their expressions are wonderful.
I love the Egyptian look they've got to them.

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niolynn In reply to ShiningAngel [2010-04-17 02:31:19 +0000 UTC]

HEEE *A* <3333 Thank you

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MikaBlackwood [2010-04-16 03:29:21 +0000 UTC]

i really like this image is well balanced and the characters proportions are excellent keep up thee nice work !

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niolynn In reply to MikaBlackwood [2010-04-17 02:31:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! I'll try not to disappoint you ;u;

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MikaBlackwood In reply to niolynn [2010-04-17 02:38:18 +0000 UTC]

im sure you wont X3

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