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Nippalony — Raging
Published: 2007-10-16 12:19:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 1520; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 47
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Part of a series.This is the first one. Not sure if I will upload others.
This is a story about a girl who is trapped being like the others and wants to break out of her shell into the world, as her true self.
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Comments: 10
I thought it was you initially, then I turned my laptop upside down and realised she was decades too old to be you.
The first thing I thought of as soon as I saw it was... chickens! Yeah, it kinda looked like dead chickens hanging upside down. Uh huh. Don't ask. Looks like it would've been fun wrapping her in faux spider-web stuff, though
Anyway... All very nice 
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You're right, ok i'll see how I go making them smaller.
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This is really cool, it has a great atmosphere and style.
Worked out what was bugging me though. She has a shadow that looks like it's about one foot behind her, but the smaller unfocussed figures appear much further away. I think the aura should go. Maybe darken the other figures a little to make the main one seem more prominent instead.
I do love it though.
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Hmmm ok I will darken the other figures and see how that goes.
Whats REALLY bugging me is that I didnt get any shots with her head not tilted. That would have been best.
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