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Published: 2005-12-24 19:10:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 370; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 6
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Description Call me stupid
Call me ugly
Call me anything

Just never call me
You

I'll never be like you
Sitting there
Sniffing glue

You call it an escape
I call it
Dying in shame
Fading away
From what was once
Great

I dont need to get high
To feel alive

When im sad
I cry
I dont get drunk
And pass out for the day

If this makes me weak
Then so be it
Offer all you want

I'll never do that shit.
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Comments: 40

poisonfree4me [2007-08-15 02:45:25 +0000 UTC]

well said.....i think that if you feel so strongly about your beliefs just like I, please check out my poem 'oison free' please...it would be great to get some more recognition for being smart and having a brain thats not wasted away by drugs of any shape or form..
stay gold

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opinionatedvamp [2006-01-03 09:08:05 +0000 UTC]

I like the language - except for maybe the last line - it's good and it needs to be there it just seems to move the train of thought slightly. I like the way that the words provide their own pauses, the way that it *sounds* and the way that words are a new line at the end of a sentence, it drags emphasis on them. Lovin' the message too!

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nireha In reply to opinionatedvamp [2006-01-04 01:15:36 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thanx sooo much for your comment! It really means a lot

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inkyoubiss [2005-12-30 20:35:50 +0000 UTC]

yay! great message! its good to see that you can see thru all the stupidity of that whole scene. your poem has a nice moral rebelious tone and a nice message. muy bueno

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nireha In reply to inkyoubiss [2005-12-30 22:09:43 +0000 UTC]

thank you sooooo much!

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mgnc [2005-12-27 03:07:38 +0000 UTC]

Cool one!

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nireha In reply to mgnc [2005-12-27 16:52:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanx!

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mgnc In reply to nireha [2005-12-28 05:59:38 +0000 UTC]

Ur welcome!

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Unstable4aWhile [2005-12-25 16:37:48 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This is awesome! I'm really proud of you! This is awesome!

BTW

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nireha In reply to Unstable4aWhile [2005-12-25 17:24:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!!!!!

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jump-4-joy [2005-12-25 12:48:01 +0000 UTC]

i love it! *bravo*

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nireha In reply to jump-4-joy [2005-12-25 17:24:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!!!!!!!

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jump-4-joy In reply to nireha [2005-12-26 02:53:40 +0000 UTC]

np.

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Invisible000 [2005-12-25 07:21:11 +0000 UTC]

comming from one pretty strait edge person to another...this is brillaint!!! i like it! i like it alot! its a good point that you dont need drugs to get threw life! and your word choice is verry strong and so sure of yourself and your opiniond....its great.

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nireha In reply to Invisible000 [2005-12-25 17:26:03 +0000 UTC]

wow, thank you very much!!!!! Im glad you like it!

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oooh-butterfly [2005-12-25 01:44:49 +0000 UTC]

Wow. That's amazing. It's good to hear people who won't do those things. I really like it.

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nireha In reply to oooh-butterfly [2005-12-25 01:48:09 +0000 UTC]

thank you! that means a lot

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candykiss10290 [2005-12-25 00:03:01 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is very good, it says alot for how short it is....Very good.

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nireha In reply to candykiss10290 [2005-12-25 01:29:36 +0000 UTC]

thanx so much, that really means a lot!

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candykiss10290 In reply to nireha [2005-12-25 02:31:49 +0000 UTC]

anytime!

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xstillxherex72 [2005-12-24 23:53:37 +0000 UTC]

awesome. i'm straight edge too. the sad thing is is that when i sometimes put x's on my hands, some idiots at school are like, "are you marking where your going to put your heroin?" poor ignorant, drug-brain-fried people.
anyways, very cool poem. or song? i don't know. i always consider sxe stuff songs. ah well.

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nireha In reply to xstillxherex72 [2005-12-25 01:31:56 +0000 UTC]

thanx! ya, i know what you mean. most of the people in my school have no clue what straight edge is, and ask really stupid questions about the x's on my hands. fucking kids these days...

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AsiaRe [2005-12-24 22:29:10 +0000 UTC]

very true...I feel that same this is great

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nireha In reply to AsiaRe [2005-12-25 01:34:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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ThornedRose [2005-12-24 21:32:08 +0000 UTC]

simple, catchy, powerful. And this is exactly how I feel about it as well

excellent job

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nireha In reply to ThornedRose [2005-12-25 01:34:55 +0000 UTC]

thank you for your comment! im suprised how many people actually feel this way

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ThornedRose In reply to nireha [2005-12-25 09:27:49 +0000 UTC]

I wish more did

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nireha In reply to ThornedRose [2005-12-25 17:27:32 +0000 UTC]

ya true, theres still a lot of people who think otherwise

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ShyRose [2005-12-24 21:00:06 +0000 UTC]

this is fabulous!!

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nireha In reply to ShyRose [2005-12-25 01:35:18 +0000 UTC]

thanx sooooo much!

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CrystalTearDropsx3 [2005-12-24 20:33:52 +0000 UTC]

:claps: i like it it's really good

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nireha In reply to CrystalTearDropsx3 [2005-12-25 01:35:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you !!!!!!!!

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CrystalTearDropsx3 In reply to nireha [2005-12-25 03:23:22 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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PastScarsFromLove501 [2005-12-24 20:11:41 +0000 UTC]

good don't. i hate people that do that shit. they are so weak.

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nireha In reply to PastScarsFromLove501 [2005-12-25 01:36:33 +0000 UTC]

exactly! thanx a bunch

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PastScarsFromLove501 In reply to nireha [2005-12-25 05:19:17 +0000 UTC]

no problem. i think you are awsome and thanfully you don't have to do that shit. so yeah *high five* lol

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nireha In reply to PastScarsFromLove501 [2005-12-25 05:36:36 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Hex36 [2005-12-24 19:37:50 +0000 UTC]

I like it

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nireha In reply to Hex36 [2005-12-24 19:38:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanx!

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Hex36 In reply to nireha [2005-12-24 19:40:57 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome

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