Comments: 40
opinionatedvamp [2006-01-03 09:08:05 +0000 UTC]
I like the language - except for maybe the last line - it's good and it needs to be there it just seems to move the train of thought slightly. I like the way that the words provide their own pauses, the way that it *sounds* and the way that words are a new line at the end of a sentence, it drags emphasis on them. Lovin' the message too!
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mgnc [2005-12-27 03:07:38 +0000 UTC]
Cool one!
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Invisible000 [2005-12-25 07:21:11 +0000 UTC]
comming from one pretty strait edge person to another...this is brillaint!!! i like it! i like it alot! its a good point that you dont need drugs to get threw life! and your word choice is verry strong and so sure of yourself and your opiniond....its great.
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oooh-butterfly [2005-12-25 01:44:49 +0000 UTC]
Wow. That's amazing. It's good to hear people who won't do those things. I really like it.
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candykiss10290 [2005-12-25 00:03:01 +0000 UTC]
Wow this is very good, it says alot for how short it is....Very good.
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xstillxherex72 [2005-12-24 23:53:37 +0000 UTC]
awesome. i'm straight edge too. the sad thing is is that when i sometimes put x's on my hands, some idiots at school are like, "are you marking where your going to put your heroin?" poor ignorant, drug-brain-fried people.
anyways, very cool poem. or song? i don't know. i always consider sxe stuff songs. ah well.
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nireha In reply to xstillxherex72 [2005-12-25 01:31:56 +0000 UTC]
thanx! ya, i know what you mean. most of the people in my school have no clue what straight edge is, and ask really stupid questions about the x's on my hands. fucking kids these days...
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nireha In reply to ThornedRose [2005-12-25 17:27:32 +0000 UTC]
ya true, theres still a lot of people who think otherwise
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nireha In reply to Hex36 [2005-12-24 19:38:43 +0000 UTC]
Thanx!
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