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nireha — Iraq: A Death Trap

Published: 2005-12-13 21:54:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 217; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 8
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Description You cant run,
You cant hide,
As mirages slowly disguise,
The dry dirt under your feet,
As a replenishing lake,
Fighting away the heat,
Struggling to breathe,
As you take a drink,
The dirt swelling up your lungs,
You stumble back,
They're coming fast,
With their machine guns,
Fully loaded,
Aiming towards you,
Regardless of your innocence,
You've lived here,
You'll die here too,
Terrorists surround your body,
Disintegrating the line,
Separating life and death,
Your families already gone,
You have nothing left,
Surrender to them,
It might save you a day,
Don't dare fight back,
You don't stand a chance anyway,
Its all up to fate,
Which you no longer control,
The shot goes off,
Your life it stole,
Your body unfolds,
As you collapse to the ground,
Silencing all sounds,
While all of your memories,
Slowly fade out,
You open your mouth,
No longer able to shout,
With wide bloodshot eyes,
You soundly drift away.
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Comments: 17

inkyoubiss [2005-12-30 20:43:18 +0000 UTC]

AHH! i LOVE it!!! i love the mirage as a metephore for the guy's innocence!!!! so coolio! im soooo going to have to add this to my Faves

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nireha In reply to inkyoubiss [2005-12-30 22:17:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanx !!!!!!!!!

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oooh-butterfly [2005-12-24 04:48:49 +0000 UTC]

You are really really good, gosha.

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nireha In reply to oooh-butterfly [2005-12-24 04:50:58 +0000 UTC]

wow, thanx

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oooh-butterfly In reply to nireha [2005-12-24 04:54:36 +0000 UTC]

It's true~

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nireha In reply to oooh-butterfly [2005-12-24 05:00:20 +0000 UTC]

thank you again! oh, this is random, but its driving me crazy. how do you make a link of an avatar from a DA club, to display on your signature?

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oooh-butterfly In reply to nireha [2005-12-24 05:57:44 +0000 UTC]

I have no idea

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nireha In reply to oooh-butterfly [2005-12-24 15:50:47 +0000 UTC]

lol, okay

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AsiaRe [2005-12-16 01:38:00 +0000 UTC]

.....I'm speechless....

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nireha In reply to AsiaRe [2005-12-16 03:46:25 +0000 UTC]

YAAAAA! thats good right?

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AsiaRe In reply to nireha [2005-12-16 20:02:25 +0000 UTC]

Yeah it's good...

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nireha In reply to AsiaRe [2005-12-17 00:58:31 +0000 UTC]

YAAAAY!

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Chic123 [2005-12-14 11:09:41 +0000 UTC]

Very nice but you misspelt breathe it needs and 'e' on the end. but i really like it overall.

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nireha In reply to Chic123 [2005-12-14 21:45:58 +0000 UTC]

I have the worst spelling/grammer ever! Thanx for the comment and pointing that out!

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mgnc [2005-12-14 06:35:20 +0000 UTC]

Woah, great piece! its really deep n strong w/c s pretty good. great job!

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nireha In reply to mgnc [2005-12-14 21:38:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanx sooo much!

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mgnc In reply to nireha [2005-12-15 04:26:00 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome! anytym!

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