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nireha — Tightly Gripping Thin Air
Published: 2006-09-30 14:46:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 236; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 7
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Description Not this time
Will I live in fear

My breath escapes me
...But I will not die here

Knuckles are bloody
As the walls cave in

The game is over
...But I can still win.
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Comments: 11

ShyRose [2007-05-16 23:51:28 +0000 UTC]

extremmmmmmmmmmmmmely late comment!
sorry!
but definately to the point and well written

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Invisible000 [2006-10-11 22:04:18 +0000 UTC]

this is wonderful...in a sad way, i hope this feeling does not last too much longer and i hope you win...

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nireha In reply to Invisible000 [2006-10-11 22:35:25 +0000 UTC]

ya...me too.

Thanks.

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candykiss10290 [2006-10-08 02:50:53 +0000 UTC]

Omg... this is so beautiful! I love it...I have to fav!!

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nireha In reply to candykiss10290 [2006-10-08 22:50:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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candykiss10290 In reply to nireha [2006-10-09 01:43:28 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome!

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nireha In reply to candykiss10290 [2006-10-09 20:09:47 +0000 UTC]

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starlit-sky [2006-10-04 21:35:26 +0000 UTC]

lovely work!
short and meaningful...
very well written!

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nireha In reply to starlit-sky [2006-10-04 21:56:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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jump-4-joy [2006-09-30 15:10:17 +0000 UTC]

i love it nice and short but very moving.

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nireha In reply to jump-4-joy [2006-10-01 13:15:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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