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nireha — Destruction Of Pain

Published: 2006-03-02 19:44:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 142; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description Hit me all you want
i cant feel it anymore
scream at me 'till your lungs burst
i cant hear you anymore

Your disease
has infected me
now immunity
has swept through my body

Take a knife
and cut into my veins
ill just laugh
at all the pain

The more i cry
the more satisfied you get
so I'm wiping these tears dry
as I watch your smile subside

You've lost all control
over every part of me
i know how it kills you
to see me so happy

Deeper and deeper
theses bruises get
until my heart stops
I'll keep on fighting it.
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Comments: 16

ShyRose [2006-07-17 20:37:16 +0000 UTC]

DAM!! what a perfect poem to read for my mood at the moment. just had a argument with my dad because he saw a photo of me happy with a male!! this poem is genius!!

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nireha In reply to ShyRose [2006-07-19 21:43:20 +0000 UTC]

thanks...and that sounds pretty screwed up that your dad is mad because your happy with a *dun dun dun* male

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nireha In reply to nireha [2006-07-21 02:41:08 +0000 UTC]

wait...why are going to move out of your house?!?!?!

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ShyRose In reply to nireha [2006-07-20 20:00:14 +0000 UTC]

lol. i love your *dun dun dun* bit. i get friends that give a sarcastic gasp when i told them. they were like ' *gasp* you was touching a male!!'

but yeh... he is a bit screwed up. i was never bothered bout moving out of my home but, after that night, i can't wait!! it's going to cause so many arguments but i have to do it. not just for me, for my two younger sisters as well.

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inkyoubiss [2006-03-04 20:51:30 +0000 UTC]

Yayyy! i loved it! nice picture you painted there!!! you totally got your point across very very well. A+

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nireha In reply to inkyoubiss [2006-03-05 02:20:39 +0000 UTC]

thankies!!!!

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SelineSaintClair [2006-03-04 06:52:16 +0000 UTC]

I love it good job and nicely done!!


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nireha In reply to SelineSaintClair [2006-03-04 16:58:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you sooo much!!!!

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SelineSaintClair In reply to nireha [2006-03-09 22:19:47 +0000 UTC]

You're Welcome!!!

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Invisible000 [2006-03-04 04:28:53 +0000 UTC]

this is so sad...a lot of you poems bring tears to my eyes!

well done

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nireha In reply to Invisible000 [2006-03-04 16:56:51 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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deadlydreaming [2006-03-03 03:37:08 +0000 UTC]

Thats awsome your getting so good.....

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nireha In reply to deadlydreaming [2006-03-03 22:54:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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deadlydreaming In reply to nireha [2006-03-04 17:35:07 +0000 UTC]

no problem!!!!

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oooh-butterfly [2006-03-02 21:00:40 +0000 UTC]

This is really really good.

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nireha In reply to oooh-butterfly [2006-03-02 23:29:57 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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