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nireha — The Death Of A Love

Published: 2006-03-30 17:43:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 198; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 5
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Description Raking up sticks and stones
Rotting decay of worn bones
Skeletons of beauty
Trapped along your window scape
Flowers all aligned
In a garden of your fate
One row for pain
Another for hate
The rest were never planted
...Or maybe just stepped on and pulled out
Rescuing the dying from this hell

Arrows point to misleadings
Rusty shovels for your burial
Broken glass casket
This couldn't have lasted
Through acidic tears
Remorseful years of digging
Searching
Finding nothing

Just what I've always wanted
Nothing
Blank face an erased slate
Guiding towards the end
Beginnings of sins called everything

Tears stain the concrete
Pouring down
The storm never calms
Dead branches sway
In the sky appears your face
Indenting out your scared lips
Marking our final yet eternal kiss

I guess the thought of you and me
Travailing up and over this wreck
Is just plain insanity.
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Comments: 14

deadlydreaming [2006-04-09 04:17:12 +0000 UTC]

WOW..beautiful

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nireha In reply to deadlydreaming [2006-04-10 01:49:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you much!

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mgnc [2006-04-03 05:02:04 +0000 UTC]

DATS JUZ AWESOME! Neat.

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nireha In reply to mgnc [2006-04-04 02:25:38 +0000 UTC]

thank you much!!!!!!!!

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mgnc In reply to nireha [2006-04-06 06:52:41 +0000 UTC]

NO biggie! ^-^

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DeadlyDoorKnob [2006-03-31 00:23:09 +0000 UTC]

bravo me likes it

especially the opening

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nireha In reply to DeadlyDoorKnob [2006-03-31 02:32:47 +0000 UTC]

thankies mucho!!!!!

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DeadlyDoorKnob In reply to nireha [2006-03-31 03:49:36 +0000 UTC]

^^ mhm

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SelineSaintClair [2006-03-30 23:18:38 +0000 UTC]

OHHHHH!!! I LOVE IT!!!! I even faved it..... GOOD work!!!!!

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nireha In reply to SelineSaintClair [2006-03-31 02:28:16 +0000 UTC]

thank you sooo much!!!

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SelineSaintClair In reply to nireha [2006-03-31 21:57:23 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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oooh-butterfly [2006-03-30 22:57:17 +0000 UTC]

woaaaaaaaah. FAVED. Dude this is beautiful. Like seriously,

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nireha In reply to oooh-butterfly [2006-03-31 02:26:33 +0000 UTC]

thank you sooo much more than soooooo much!!!!!!!
i dont think that made since....oh well...thank you!!!!!!

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oooh-butterfly In reply to nireha [2006-03-31 02:47:17 +0000 UTC]

It really does. And you're very welcome

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