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Frog27 [2010-04-01 01:28:23 +0000 UTC]
Maybe if the effect was a bit bigger and the colours from the flames on each hand blended together it might work better. Also I think the red on his hand kinda blended in with the red hair and that made it less effective. I can see how you tried to differentiate the reds, but a completely different colour may have been the way to go. Just a few ideas that you might consider... Of course this is your pic, so you would know best what would work for you. I just thought I would throw some ideas out there.
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Nixicole In reply to Frog27 [2010-04-01 09:19:34 +0000 UTC]
thanx..i really had a hard time on the hands
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Frog27 [2010-03-28 00:32:48 +0000 UTC]
I really like how you do the wings. They are fantastic. Very ethereal.
Your skill with fire is also good. I find that elements (fire, water) are the very hardest things to do right. And you really did the sense of heat well. I think that's partly the colors you choose and the form of the flames/embers. The spiky effect on the hands works less well though.
For some reason it still feels a little unfinished and I'm not sure why.
But it's really good. And I love the story. Good luck on finishing it!
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Nixicole In reply to Frog27 [2010-03-29 03:33:23 +0000 UTC]
thanks you're right, i had a hard time on blending the colors from the hands ..i was thinking on making it look like they're hands are burning.. but i guess the effect wasn't that good.. but thanks a lot for the
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KnightleyArcher [2010-03-28 00:20:27 +0000 UTC]
That looks awesome; thank you for describing what it means in the comment box. Really original
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PrussianMalaria [2010-03-28 00:19:55 +0000 UTC]
The girl's hair is beautiful, I'm glad it's not over-done.
I just love pictures with a story behind them!
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Nixicole In reply to PrussianMalaria [2010-03-29 03:35:21 +0000 UTC]
thanks . i was planning on making a manga out of it but i guess it would take time..
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