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mja42x [2018-07-31 11:58:26 +0000 UTC]
Really like the panel layout on this page, as it transitions back and forth from past to present day. Moments like this can be jarring but you pulled it off nicely!
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Nodegama-art In reply to mja42x [2018-07-31 12:19:26 +0000 UTC]
It only worked because there is really not much going on in the present, when you look at it.
I used the simple concept of: Siff gathering random objects from her environment.
The flashback I mainly used as a support for Siffs seemingly random actions.
βWhy is she gathering random objectsβ - βShe Knows a Trickβ
A troublesome past and her complicated relationship to her Boss, all condensed into 3 panels.
I also foreshadowed a character I am planning to introduce to the DU, without giving name and a clear appearance away.
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Latroma [2018-07-26 20:59:53 +0000 UTC]
Macgyver Moment For the Win!
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Nodegama-art In reply to Latroma [2018-07-26 23:34:37 +0000 UTC]
Finally someone made the comparison
It was about time.
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Latroma In reply to Nodegama-art [2018-07-26 23:47:36 +0000 UTC]
*laughs* I'm just late to the party is all, but yes.Β She's giving me a very Mac feel here.Β She really is.Β ^_^ Jury rigging for the win
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Nodegama-art In reply to Galordeus [2018-07-18 15:20:57 +0000 UTC]
Some sacrifices have to be made for the good of humanity.
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DonDevious [2018-07-13 13:00:13 +0000 UTC]
She's helping! Yay~!
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bogmonster [2018-07-13 00:54:09 +0000 UTC]
This is brilliant!Β I love the backstory. I think it's great you are integrating it into theΒ main story. This is what these challenges are all about?
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BjAtkinson [2018-07-12 15:28:35 +0000 UTC]
I really love how her back story pulls this together!
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Nodegama-art In reply to BjAtkinson [2018-07-12 15:40:15 +0000 UTC]
I'm slowly revealing piece by piece.
We currently know very little about Siff, who she is, what she's good at and what she has done in the past.
I saw this as a good opportunity to flesh out one certain aspect.
When you first pitched the idea of Siff being able to disable the machines I thought βThere is no way she would know something like that.β
but then I thought: βBut IF she was able to do that, HOW could she have acquired this skill?β
so yeah. You are partially responsible for this part of her characterization.
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BjAtkinson In reply to Nodegama-art [2018-07-12 15:55:22 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad to have helped with the inspiration, but all the credit goes to your brilliant story writing to make the scenario work to your benefit.Β
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