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Noir-Black-Shooter — Ryoko Subaru
Published: 2014-08-11 06:03:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 862; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 18
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i like the art all up, maybe you could work on a few things though. try and make the folds in the clothes more realistic by adding shadows under/above them, if you know what i mean.
It's not very original (the pose and the moon thing xD)
you did a great job at intimidating the style used in MSN!
you should work on the way you shade and highlight, the art is great but it's the colouring that needs work.
I personally don't think this should be marked as mature content as it is quite suitable (but the dress is a bit short and there is cleavage showing so I guess it could be marked are mature)
i liked how you did the moon and.... stars? (i assume they are photo shopped in, but it still looks great anyway)
The water (i assume) could use a bit more... realism.
Overall, the artwork is fairly good, keep it up!
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you sure you won't do a nude version? you have a pixiv account to do that.
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If I can do a naked version, but it would be Monday when the climb deviantart a version censored and uncensored version on pixiv
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so you'll do that on monday on pixiv, right? is that what your saying?
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On Monday, will upload a new picture of Ryoko naked'll upload a version with Deviantart censorship and a uncensored version on pixiv
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ok. that's all i need to know.
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The shading looks a bit flat and the outlines look pretty boring too...
I looked through your stuff. It all looks like you used material of other people and just drew over it.
no consistant Style in "your" pictures, no real descriptions.
Maybe I'm completely wrong and you really have to improve a lot.
But if you just recolor stuff then... Please stop it and learn how to draw.
Recoloring doesn't help you to improve at all!
P.S.: there are a lot of good Tutorials out there that help a lot ^^
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