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nora038 — Love In the Face Of Pain
Published: 2014-08-11 01:14:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 986; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 0
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Why is true love so hard to express?Why can't I throw away those thoughts of what that man instiled in me? I have met and befriended ones that prove all of those instillments are not always true.
Yet, when I find a person worth taking a chance on, I can't quiet those thoughts and inner demons for me to
fight for what I want or reach out my hand for help and my scars raise up again of what that man did to and said to me.
Every part of my body says run, but my soul says please help me, holed me and love me.
I love you, but I can't talk, I can't move and I can't act on it.
I am...sorry.
By nora038
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Thank you, Nao-chan and for the favourites to.
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You have several misspellings and little grammatical errors here... Spell check is your friend. Writing is a delicate art, and unlike what many may believe or tell you, it has rules that have to be accounted for. A successful writer (or anything else, for that matter), is one that strives for improvement. Words like 'throw' and 'through' and their difference, as well as the spelling of the word prove not 'proove', and befriended as one word and not two. These small things are easy to fix and will immediately make you ten times the writer that you were.
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