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Published: 2013-03-11 04:42:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 544; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 3
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Hey there, I saw that you asked for some criticism so I'll try to give you something. First though, I have to say that this is really cool and I love the effect you've given here! If I was going to give a criticism, I'd say to try to give it the 3D view that you're aiming for. You're already doing great, but I'd say try to add more detail in the foreground to give it a more realistic look. Maybe try making the clouds alittle more blurred at the edges-at first I thought they were floating mountains! Anyway, that's all I can say, it's a really good picture and I hope this has helped!
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I just don't get how you can do this with a tablet.
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you are saying that you can do it with out?
WOW!
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Well, I do paint. It just takes a while.
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this is a pretty funnny thread 
Nice work!
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it will be great if you could give some Criticism
just be strait forward
thanks
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Ok here it goes.
1.) Lovely use of colors, like the colors.
2.) Right now there are some problems with depth. You need to work a little on separating the foreground and middle ground. The valley below looks like it's not a valley but just on the same level as the cliff edge. i.e. the mountains look like rubble.
3.) Not sure where the focal point is , so you may need to move some things around.
4.) Work more on the cat animal
Question to you, why have you called it flying, what's this image supposed to depict.
Overally the idea and imagination is here, but just needs some shaping.
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