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Published: 2012-06-04 11:20:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 688; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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A larger version of : [link] for school.A1 size I think ..
Watercolour, acrylic and pen on paper
Let me know if there's anything I should improve!
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I know there are some flaws in the anatomy of this piece, and it's made me come to hate it. I should spend mmore time working out these flaws but I'm always so excited to paint >.<
Anyway, please do not comment about these, as you can see several people have already informed me and it gets old very fast. If it is something you feel nobody has already mentioned, then by all means go ahead. Comments about the style, colour, and what it makes you think / feel are much more useful to me at this point in time.
thaaaaanks
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Let me first say that I love your way of colouring and choices of hues. While you are doing a fine job of establishing the basic colours and facial details, I think you should work on the viewpoint of the nose, the size of the lips, and the placement of the eyes. Her right eye seems to be squinting, and her lips tend the stick out. But, alas, this is a good piece~. Just work on composition and facial features and you're set. c:
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Well, there's always something to improve, right?
Some facial anatomy issues as it was mentioned above, though I like the way you painted her hair. Red lips are nice touch. She looks like either a ghost of a drowned girl or some water nymph. But don't pay attention to me and my rather insane imagination.
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Indeed there is
Ah, yes I know. I always want to skip the mapping out so I can start painting, and get mad at myself afterwards every time >.<
Thank you. Haha, I love your imagination!
Thanks for taking the time to comment :3
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Well, I like the picture. Blue and bright red look really good together. Also it's pretty hard to find realism here.
The only thing I think you need to work more - angles of the face. When human is looking up and on side, it's pretty hard to draw all the face correctly, I suggest you drawing lines when you sketch, like on globe. So, the face will be more symmetric. Also the woman's ear on your artwork is too big, or placed too down. The top of the ear is on the same line with eyes :>
Hope it helps ^U^
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I feel like the head is very wide for being 3/4 tilted.
The eyes are also a little bit off.
But other then that , Watercolor technique is fantastic <3 I really like it.
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Thanks for the feedback!
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Wauw, I think it's beautiful! I can't think of anything you should improve
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it
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