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Published: 2019-03-12 02:51:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 9020; Favourites: 126; Downloads: 7
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Some girly talk and bonding 
Can you guess who Kimche is? ^^ it's maybe a strange moment to name-drop her, but figured it would be easy to tell.
Also, feedback question: in the second panel, Awka originally said "you don't even know us yet" (remember Acol's introduction on page 51 ). But, in the end I went for "you still carry the scent of far away", which I liked better. Does it sound too dumb, or cheesy? Sometimes I'm unsure about how to write stuff: I'm afraid of being redundant, but I'm also afraid of being unclear and sometimes I have no idea of how to reach a middle ground. So please, feel free tell me to change it!! (or make a suggestion for something tat sounds better!
I have a LOT of fanart to feature from the couple of months I had no Core!! And I intend to feature them all, 'cause I love them all. However, I have limitation on the number of Thumbnails I can add so I figured I'd go somewhat thematic.
Featuring in this page, Awka's huemul gang!
Future ones will be group pics, red deer, awka herself and others!
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I really felt that line Aco says about helping people. I feel like that myself in life.
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That's a nice thing to feel!
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Well, relationships can grow as people gets to know one another! ^^
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The environment, lighting and atmosphere on this page is so beautiful, Agu!!!! I love the mixture of blue-green with the more golden colors of autumn. It gives the feeling of cold and yet not quite winter. Absolutely perfect x)
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I really dig this new approach of your coloring method these pass few pages, the lighting and the ambient looks fitting to the background, and sometimes the situation itself. ^^ This page is beautifully well done, and the interaction between these two are quite natural and playful, though I never actually know how girls actually bond with each other, this looks kinda right? XD 
About the phrase Awka said over there, I was honestly lost at first, but then I understand what you mean when I read the description, and I think it's not dumb at all, similar to Watershed Down novel, the rabbits call food from the farm Flayrah instead of just food. I can't see why you can't use a few deer languages you made up. But for it to work it needs to be use quite regularly or have more specific words that both of the species use differently, I think that might even filled your world with more lore and characters for that. 
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Thank you a ton for such nice words, Slok! 
As for the words, I'm not inventing a language for deer as that would've needed to be introduced already, but I like to include some "deer conversation", wityh references to the sense of smell, which is very acute in them. I think i have afew before this! regardless, I will try to re-read the page at some point and see how to work around the overlapping in the two sentences, without changing meanings
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Let the ship saaaaail! 8)
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Panel 1 y 2: Yo si entendí lo de las esencias
Panel 3 y 4: Nnnnnnnnnnnngh detente Acol,eres demasiado linda,me estas matando!
Panel 5 y 6: ok ambas quieren matarme!,demasiada lindura junta
Panel 7,8 y 9: Woooo ok,Acol definitivamente esta coqueteando con nuestra niña Awka y de que forma!,"eres tan grande y musculosa" y "deberíamos luchar" es de profesionales,woooooo you go girl!
Panel 10: Wohoho Awka no se queda atrás,Dios ya besense!
Panel 11: Awwwwwwwwwwwww por favor,se estaba poniendo bueno!,que no les enseñaron que interrumpir es malo colorados?
Panel 12 y 13: Ok estoy teniendo Bambi flashbacks justo ahora
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Genial! ^^
Y aww, jaja, omg. Yeeeees, me encanta el shippeo *v* he adorado escribir ésta página y me encanta que la escena se disfrute
En verdad mil gracias por tan detallado comment
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"partake on" should be "partake in". That's it though, otherwise, cute page.
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Thank you a ton, Cloudie!
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THIS SHIP HAS NO BRAKES!!!!!!!!!!
Es una forma de agregarle mas personalidad a las especies a través del lenguaje que, al igual que nosotros, aunque hablen el mismo idioma pueden tener diferencias en cuanto a frases y modismos de a cuerdo a la region, y en este caso de acuerdo a la especie también.
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Shipshipshipship!! ='D
Te agradezco a mil por tan lindas palabras, Night!
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I love this comic so much. You do a wonderful job with the character designs and backgrounds!
Dialogue is great too, and the setting is so interesting! The cat is my favorite design, I love that it is an uncommon species people draw.
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OMG, thank you very much for such kind words!!
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Dos personajes estan compartiendo la misma escena y hablan de forma amistosa. Must ship and fangirl (?) Fuera de joda, Acol me parece preciosa (me derretí con el panel en que está torciendo la cabeza mientras hace la pregunta. Es un gesto que yo usualmente asociaba con los perros, pero en ella fue bien
Respecto al diálogo, me gusta cómo lo dejaste, así más poético. Capaz son viajes mios, pero por la forma en que viven los huemules de no dañarse entre ellos, ser de sexualidad abierta y abiertos en cuanto a la conformación de familias, yo me los imaginaría más como bichos espirituales, poéticos y medios hippies; y que eso se traslade a la forma de expresarse. Por el contrario los ciervos colorados serian más "secos", más de ir a lo concreto, de no adornar ideas... más como el pobre tipo que vive estresado en el mundo actual, esta de mal humor casi siempre, contesta con mala cara y con monosilabos.... Tú dirás xD
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De ninguna manera voy a protestar por el shippeo al fin y al cabo, vengo de la escuela de The Lost Canvas, jaja.
Mil gracias por tan lindo comentario, Jen
Un millón de gracias!
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Must ship and fangirl es totalmente valido,yo ya lo hago!,wooooooo Awkacol...ok ese es un pésimo nombre pero es lo primero que se me ocurrió 
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Estas dos ya están hechas todas unas comadres (??), me encantan las relaciones de este tipo, muchas veces se encierran a protagonistas y no al resto de personajes! Acol en el cuarto panel ladeando la cabeza es super tierna!!
Sobre el diálogo, debo admitir que mi primera intención fue relacionarlo con la advertencia de Acol de no acercarse, es decir pensé que hablaban de lo mismo, quizá si no estuviera ese comentario condicionando lo que sigue, sería más sencilla la interpretación del segundo panel. La idea me encantó cuando lo leí en el comentario, pero tuve que leer el comentario primero. Pero también sería una pena perder ese detalle ¿quizá si lo escribís al revés y sin un punto pueda resultar más claro? algo como "...you still carry the scent of far away, I'm surprised and also happy that you decided to join this." ¿O quizás aclarando que acaba de llegar para hacerlo más claro sin necesidad de poner que no se conocen mucho? "you just arrived and still carry the scent of far away, I'm surprised and also happy that etc, etc" o tal vez "you just arrived and you still carry the scent of far away, yet you decided to join this. I'm surprised and also happy!".
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Mil gracias Kimya!
Muchísimas gracias por tan lindas palabras!
Sipis! se me dio una especie de overlapping, y tiene mucho sentido lo que decís. te agradezco mucho por el feedback!
En verdad mil gracias por todo!
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They're such party poopers! D =
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This page passes the Bechdel test! Love seeing girls chatting it up and bonding! Would also like to see what the deer version of wrestling is. XD
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Same! Happy girly bonding time is one of my favourite type of interactions in stories ^^
Haha, hopefully, it will be shown at some point!
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Happy girly bonding time for the win!,we need more of this people come on,I'm looking at YOU Disney!,and Pixar,don't think of hiding,I can see you from here!
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Oh my lord these babs are too precious 😤😱
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Thank you very much! ;v;
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I want to see more of this friendship. Acol seems like a powerful ally.
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I'm under the impression we will! ^^ I loved writing this scene.
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa I'm so excited for what comes next!
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Wheee! ^^
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can't wait for it!
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I like Awka's comment about her smelling of far away :3, I interpreted it as "Girl, you literally just got here and you still don't mind doing dangerous stuff to help us, wth" xD
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Yup, that was indeed the intention of that line! ^^ super glad it was caught
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I've finally caught up ! I really like the "you still carry the scent of far away" comment as well. It feels like it has better flow than the original comic I interpreted it as she didn't have Awka's scent on her so the red deer wouldn't be as gun ho to attack her possibly?
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Thank you very much! ^^ I leaned towards it in part of due to it sounding less generic, and also a bit because it highlighted the animality of the characters better. And, it's a bit of the two: the bubble in the first panel about not catching Awka's scent has indeed relation with thew fact they don't want to smell Awka in Acol (reasons to which should be clear later! ^^).
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I def find it fitting ! I assume it's so the red deer won't be able to smell them to.
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Actually, I didn't quite get at first what she was trying to say. I only got it after reading the description. But I figure others wouldn't have any problem.
Gray Pelt with black belly, Acol reminds me now of Quidu, and I have this throwback at Quidu and Awka's mom xD
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Ah, thanks for the feedback!! I will wait to read a few more comments and change it if most agree ^^ thank you very much! I sometimes find it hard to look i perspective as the author, and there's also the fact that my comic has a low rate of uploads so that alot of time passes between pages.
That's an interesting parallel ='D
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