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since Round 1 I've been wanting to be the first to upload a page :'D so *goes childish* fiiiiirst!!
now that's one fabulous Ring, ain't it? all those flowers and colors are the perfect place to spill some blood.
I still can't believe I made it to Round 4... and be sure I'll try my best
I like the idea I had for the script (which is almost done, only needs some buildup), and this round will be shorter than the last, but hopefully will turn out enjoyable, I'm sure eager to work on it. I especially have the goal of getting better with my writing (express just as much but better and with less words), so constructive criticism is appreciated, and if you see any typo don't hesitate to let me know ^^. Dolly belongs to
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Aphari belongs to
Fenix belongs to
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Your Very Welcome! AnnA
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I love your descriptions of the environments; they give such a clear pocture of the setting 
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Thank you very much!! :'D dolly is so cute and so fun to draw! <3
Ha ha, I'm still planning my characters's role in the rebellion, hopefully, if I make it to Round 5, I'll be able to show something ^^ *crosses fingers*
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The backgrounds of your illustrations are gorgeous! 
And I like the new plot twists
That expression of the little kitsune is adorable too! ^w^
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thank you so much!! 
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Ooooh yes, I can't wait to see where this talk of rebellion will lead owo
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Very interested to see where you're going with this, and congrats on getting the first upload to Round 4. :'D
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thank you very much!!
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Que fondos mas divinos!! la verdad que me fascinó ese bosque, tan colorido, tan vivo (y tan perfecto para una carniceria XD ) El zorrito te quedó totalmente adorable, al igual que la interacción. Parece interesante eso de la rebelión... habrá que ver cómo lo hacen y cuando mover las fichas. Y espero con ansias que nos reveles qué significa el sueño del cuarto blanco, me encanta como has ido desarrollando la historia, sigue así :3
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muchísimas gracias por los cumplidos, Jen!
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Pffft ya quiero ver la reacción de Yucca cuando vea a su oponente
Su veneno no le va a servir de mucho ahora
Muy buen relato, de nuevo tu lenguaje detallado y descriptivo me encantó, y en cuanto al dibujo el segundo cuadro sin duda es mi favorito con todos esos colores y nitidez a pesar de ser un cuadro pequeño, aunque el primero es hermosísimo también
Hmm lamentablemente no te puedo dar mucha crítica constructiva con respecto a la parte literal, disfruto de una buena lectura pero escribir no es lo mio, pero si te sirve de algo me gusta lo que estas haciendo hasta ahora aunque no tenga mucha idea de como puedes mejorar
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ya se verá! :'D
muchas gracias por todos los cumplidos! ^^ he estado tratando de mejorarlo, ir más a lo concreto y no perderme en una pared de texto, sin recortar contenido.
eeee, me alegra que te hayan gustado!!
y, no te preocupes, es siempre difícil hacerlo cuando se trata de un idioma no-nativo ^^
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Aaaaaa your work is up already! I'm so glad that you got through, and thanks for mentioning Aphari, it's so sweet that Yucca actually acknowledged Aphari's defeat <3
Can't wait to see more work from you, and I'll still be supporting you all the way! c:
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thank you so much!! :'D this is the Round I'm going to write the fastest it seems (5 days after it was announced I had the last 2 pages already scribbled ^^)
and, you're very welcome
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Oh boy, looks like the rebellion is growing~
I personally can't wait to see how Yucca reacts to not only going against another big opponent, but also against a robot xD
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thank you very much ^^
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they are all so nice <3 I freaking LOVE the first drawing. It's so...majestic and great. Capuli, you are a little brave soldier and everyone loves you.
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thank you so much dear!
aww, I want to see more of Gentile and Soave ^^
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A really nice page
You draw Dolly so adorable. :3
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thank you very much!
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Aay, mientras no sea tan desafinada como mi Pachirisu Edison... ^^
Bueno, ahí te dejo el reto: pintar a Yucca cantando! XD
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This page is adorable. I like the interaction between Dolly, Yucca, and Capuli.
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This resistance idea is an intriguing one. (Norri would totally go for it, being the soldier she is. Hmm, ideas for my SE...)
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I can't wait to see your SE
let's see how the "let's pwn the Thief" project turns out this time!
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And great page, BTW! 
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thanks alot ^^
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Finally first to claim the round folder eh?
One small thing; I don't know that Dolly was ever mentioned in Fenix's rounds as part of a rebellion, or if it's completely canonized to what extant the rebellion is. So if Fenix objects, we'll have to ask you to modify this page
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it took four rounds, but finally could do it :'D
oh, sure thing ^^. I did ask her about it, as I planned an early start. however, if she objects, be sure I will modify it
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Oh, it was already approved? Then no problem!
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