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Published: 2007-06-10 22:31:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 143; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description I'm kicking up eggshells...
You know,
the ones you all walk on
when you're too afraid to speak
your
mind.
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Comments: 7

silverrainbows [2007-08-10 15:52:32 +0000 UTC]

i don't think you need to add to it.
sometimes poems are good when they're short and sweet.

i like it

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Notoday In reply to silverrainbows [2007-08-10 21:02:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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N3RMiN [2007-06-12 07:41:35 +0000 UTC]

Tight. Well done.

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Notoday In reply to N3RMiN [2007-06-12 20:30:07 +0000 UTC]

Danke.

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Nibeesh [2007-06-11 07:24:39 +0000 UTC]

You know you've accomplished a lot when such a big concept has been conveyed through such a short amount of words. Those last two lines with just one word each really make it powerful and convincing (especially when read aloud, which is what I try to do with all poems I read).

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Notoday In reply to Nibeesh [2007-06-11 20:16:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the input . I kept changing the arrangement of the last few words, but felt that this worked best.

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Loveyoutoo [2007-06-10 22:46:58 +0000 UTC]

Don't.Touch.It.

It's perfect.

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