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GuinevereToGwen [2020-03-27 01:51:32 +0000 UTC]
Really great work! Is this structure based on a specific traditional form, or did you make it up?
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Noxper In reply to GuinevereToGwen [2020-03-28 22:32:09 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! I might be using a traditional form without realizing it, but I'm not very familiar with any of the technical components of poetry. I just kind of write what feels good and I really like to rhyme, haha
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Francisbu [2020-01-29 19:50:43 +0000 UTC]
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Noxper [2020-01-29 00:43:18 +0000 UTC]
I'm touched, thank you so much for the DD! It means a lot to me, guys.
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LeoReeseo [2020-01-28 13:35:21 +0000 UTC]
I don't get it
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GDeyke [2020-01-22 09:53:50 +0000 UTC]
This makes for a really great visual allegory.
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EkoFox [2020-01-19 21:58:07 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I love this! It feels very fantasy, like it belongs in Middle Earth, and I think the rhyming contributes to that. The imagery is well done throughout. I can really see what's happening, and I grow more interested, until I finally see it all culminate at the end in a beautiful moment. The length feels just right, too. This is definitely my favorite poetry piece of yours! I look forward to seeing more. Well done.
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