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doctormo [2011-04-27 18:54:54 +0000 UTC]
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I should like to review this art in two parts. The first is the background:
I love the colours, the shapes, the greys and the shading you've managed. The tree trunk is well drawn and nicely planned out while the foliage looks like it's really multi layered and containing lots of small things you can't quite see, just the trick for the eye.
I thought the dark brown trunk in the far back was a little too dark, since to my eye it was hard to see it as an object standing on top of the foliage and not simply a gap in the foliage looking out onto a sky of some sort. But looking closer you can see some gnarling so it probably just needs some highlighting and something to push it out more.
The green borders around the foliage are somewhat out of place. I expect you originally had the foliage green and then changed it? A dark purple would work better for the stroke there.
The figure is good. I like the pose, it's natural and believable. And not an easy pose either, it has to touch the background in three places. I also like the colours on the figure, it goes well. There is an issue with missing stroke(lines) on some of the parts and black stroke on yet others still. So the impression is one of incompleteness for that, but looking closely you can see the stroke it's just very light compared to the background.
I think he might need more shadows to more firmly cement his feet to the trunk, at the moment my eye could quite believe he was floating just above the trunk, just a little. That may just be the angle of the light though, so it may not be an issue.
Overall, I really like this art. I normally only critique art I like a lot. Hope this helps e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
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doctormo In reply to NuBearEull [2011-04-28 00:15:38 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome, keep up the great artwork. Have a look around my artwork if you like.
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FiskXPhantom [2011-04-28 01:34:38 +0000 UTC]
I love it! Very inventive and different, his flaws are apparent, yet he retains his goodness.
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ElectricGecko [2011-04-28 00:49:03 +0000 UTC]
He looks very wise, in a nimble sort of way.
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PHarold [2011-04-27 18:41:15 +0000 UTC]
I don't really understand why you'd lose watchers over this, but oh well. I like this guy's story, and I love his devotion to his wife.Traveling for her, and bringing back everything he can for her to experience. On our side of culture that would seem weird, but for Taiossu, it fits him. To break out of the mold for the love of someone special.
He looks so sad, and I'm quite sad that his wife is gone. And the possibility she may have passed while he was away,is a heartbreaking.
I love the shoes too! Dammit girl, you should design shoes!
Anyhow, the eyes are gorgeous, and the details of the jewelry are tribal and fun.
I don't know if I've ever done any fan characters. I may at one point,back in high school. I know I have a roster of about 40-50 characters I made up on the spot for art class. If I can find them, I'll see what I can do with them!
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NuBearEull In reply to PHarold [2011-05-02 04:16:43 +0000 UTC]
Some people have a bad reaction to anything they see as too "anthro". I am not sure if that is what Taiossu is, but he's not my garden-variety humanoid, that's for certain.
Here's where I ramble ... you can skip it if you like:
The Jinnar think about marriage in a funny way. They strive to give their spouses their dreams in whatever way possible. He just felt so bad for her and knew that the best way to show he he loved her was to give her, in any way he could, that which the wanted the most: to experience other worlds.
Unfortunately, she did die when he was away. And he found out about it a day or two later because he was *very* far away ... in a different part of the galaxy, no less. But what was most amazing was that it wasn't just Taiossu and the other Jinnar who came for her funeral. People from all over the universe came. Emperors, kings, great generals and all manner of people came to honor her because they knew how dear she was to him. So in a way, he was (in the end), able to bring all these worlds to her. It closed things up fairly well for him. He could put her to rest knowing that she was loved and remembered in all those worlds she could never visit but so wished to see.
If I knew someone who could make them? I'd be all over it.
Thanks very much!
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windyautumnmoon [2011-04-27 17:30:57 +0000 UTC]
Great character design Nu and I loved getting to learn a little about him.
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NuBearEull In reply to windyautumnmoon [2011-05-02 03:48:25 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! He may not show up again ... darn my runaway sketches!
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CiiMoore [2011-04-27 17:15:32 +0000 UTC]
I rather like this design, and I am always very pleased to see new and different things from my fave artists.
Taiossu sort of resembles Reg...I think. I love his character design and the pose. I love seeing all the different characters you create and write about, they're always so full of emotion.
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NuBearEull In reply to CiiMoore [2011-05-02 04:07:34 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I am just paranoid people will turn their noses up at it because it's too "anthro" ... which isn't what I'd call him. Not sure what to call it, actually.
There is some resemblance there. Only Reg never would have left home. He'd have stayed home, fretted and made Lisa crazy.
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CiiMoore In reply to NuBearEull [2011-05-02 05:00:02 +0000 UTC]
I don't understand people...nor do I really try too. At least not that sort of reasoning. It's your art Nuisance, if people are going to get a bee up their ass about a little change, then they can go watch someone else.
I love your style and your work. All of it. <3
LOL poor Reg. I hope nothing ever happens to Lisa. I love her and Reg.<3
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NuBearEull In reply to CiiMoore [2011-05-04 17:03:13 +0000 UTC]
SPOILER ALERT:
<.< >.> Um ... why do you think Reg goes crazy and murders 35 people? What is the one thing that would put him in that state of mind?
I am not proud of what has to happen, but there is no better motivation for him.
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CiiMoore In reply to NuBearEull [2011-05-04 17:59:42 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh noooo! The infamous spoiler alert!!!
lol
I see now. I can't wait to see your story unfold. <3 It has been a treat for me to watch it grow and come to life.
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TheCursemaster [2011-04-27 15:23:25 +0000 UTC]
Waaaah, such a cool character! *0* And I love the pose **
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Larissa-Bright [2011-04-27 14:16:14 +0000 UTC]
I know nothing about digital painting other than I can't do it, so apart from saying that I would have no idea this was an early attempt from how this looks, I am of little help. And of course fan characters help us get where we are today - they are stepping stones. I only ever had two (they were both Sailor Senshi for an RPG I was in) but if I hadn't have had those, no doubt I'd have evolved in a different direction to how I did. Anyway, in this pic the pose looks realistic, and there's tension in the legs which is a hard thing to get done, and the colours are all nicely integrated.
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NuBearEull In reply to Larissa-Bright [2011-05-04 16:47:19 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much!
I had more than a few in the past. But they all evolved. I would be embarrassed if their origins ever got out, but am proud of what they became over time.
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Larissa-Bright In reply to NuBearEull [2011-05-04 19:47:54 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I know what you mean - I have a lot of (old and not on DA) characters based on real life people very directly and it would be awful if the world knew about them!
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NuBearEull In reply to Khalija [2011-05-02 04:05:35 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much!! I may have to start putting more of my aliens here.
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TheAmazingDiscworld [2011-04-27 07:10:52 +0000 UTC]
If you lose watchers for this they're fools. This is a lovely piece and his story manages to outshine it. I would be happy to learn more about his life and adventures.
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NuBearEull In reply to TheAmazingDiscworld [2011-05-02 03:51:26 +0000 UTC]
Yeah ... I just know there are people out there who will turn tail and run at even the slightest hint of Anthro ... which is not really what I think he is. Hell, I don't even know that to call that.
Thanks very much!
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TheAmazingDiscworld In reply to NuBearEull [2011-05-02 04:05:07 +0000 UTC]
I would call him a humanoid extra terrestrial.
You're very welcome.
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NuBearEull In reply to dash-of-balder [2011-05-02 03:50:17 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! It's weird, in a rush to have something look more painterly, I end up with something just the opposite. But it's with weird ones like this one that I learn the most.
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MissTwist [2011-04-27 02:36:37 +0000 UTC]
I really like him.
He kind of reminds me of the roos from Tank Girl, except really, really not.
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NuBearEull In reply to MissTwist [2011-05-02 03:45:38 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
And I can totally see that. And there is a bit of kangaroo in there. (Also mongoose, monkey, rabbit and mountain lion.) Good god, what kind of crack was I on that day!!?
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NuBearEull In reply to Lady-Tempest [2011-05-02 03:48:03 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! It's true, I had to step outside of my norms to expand in any way. I get stuck in too many ruts otherwise.
Thanks!
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JeebusOfTheSwatKats [2011-04-27 02:09:02 +0000 UTC]
I cant even write something substantial because this drawing and your creativity just blows mind away, Nu. It . . .just does lol! <3
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NuBearEull In reply to JeebusOfTheSwatKats [2011-05-02 03:44:09 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much. He's a bit of a gamble character-wise, but a fun design ... and I kinda' missed him.
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