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Published: 2005-11-20 00:59:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 1088; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 7
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Description Fallacy

White like snow
The flaking lies,
Cracks in lines,
A smile splits a seam.

Counting in the darkness,
This repeating act,
Know the steps,
And,
Know the dance.

Below the placid eyes,
Behind the words,
Seething hate,
Insecure,
Scared child.

Embrace we make,
My arms a cradle,
Shake.

Clench my lids,
Ever closer,
Holding you,
I fell them break.

To tears.



No sweet words,
Doubt the wonder,
We are flesh,
All in awe....

Can't Deny,
My flaw.

The few deserve,
And we not they,
Shall smile.

No fallacy

Not I.

20/11/05
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Comments: 5

autumn-wind [2005-11-20 04:32:43 +0000 UTC]

*claps* wonderful choice of words. I don't know why, but I like the first stanza. XD

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Null-Entity In reply to autumn-wind [2005-11-20 20:54:13 +0000 UTC]

aww thanks..... I don't know what make me think of that image but its made such a nice image of people's lies as cracks in makeup.

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slingshot40 [2005-11-20 01:02:33 +0000 UTC]

Very cool, I like it. The peice has an awsome feel and pacing.

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Null-Entity In reply to slingshot40 [2005-11-20 01:07:23 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou so much, for both the comment and the Fav , I didn't expect this two minute piece of S*%T to even be viewed lol.....Just wrote my mind.....

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slingshot40 In reply to Null-Entity [2005-11-20 01:37:16 +0000 UTC]

Well I like it ^^

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