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numericvalueofaheart — The Dying Fairytale
Published: 2010-05-02 04:22:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 138; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 3
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Description So darling fantasize with me,
We can dream of a better world and a cleaner reality.
You can imagine that it's summer and I'm sweeping you off of your feet,
all with the grace and elegance of royalty.

You'll be my picture perfect princess,
painted perfectly into the comfort and safety of my arms.
Your lips will be like a puzzle piece fitting together with mine,
and we'll write our story about what it's like to love.

True love will exist on pages for a reader to embrace,
words to hold close and remember for a moment untold of .
We'll teach them all what it's like to make sacrifice,
to put another completely before your selfish self.

We'll base our lives on luck and misfortune,
as I inherit riches and kingdoms you will grace the world with beauty.
All just so that we can awake in the morning,
to discover that we're still stuck living in this grim reality.
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Comments: 7

JadenRose [2010-05-05 22:31:41 +0000 UTC]

nice last line after all the rest...way to kill the mood the start of it created! lol...good job

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numericvalueofaheart In reply to JadenRose [2010-05-06 00:18:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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JadenRose In reply to numericvalueofaheart [2010-05-06 01:27:48 +0000 UTC]

np

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Akhenaten-Aten [2010-05-03 10:12:05 +0000 UTC]

This is stunning. Absolutely beautiful. I am immensely impressed. There is so much love and beauty that spills out of those first stanzas. And the torment of the final line...

I have to say this piece is perfect. One of the loveliest things I have read in a long time.

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numericvalueofaheart In reply to Akhenaten-Aten [2010-05-03 20:08:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much. I look forward to finally writing some more pieces like this. Thank you for the feedback, though. It really means a lot to me You're a great writer yourself.

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krazikarzi [2010-05-02 04:23:27 +0000 UTC]

Awesome

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numericvalueofaheart In reply to krazikarzi [2010-05-02 18:46:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much.

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