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This is part one of a series of three pieces for the story of Undine, which was suggested by   The tale goes as...

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"Many hundreds of years ago, a fisherman lived between two supernatural worlds. His little cottage sat between a wood that was thick, tangled and haunted, and a lake that was the home to the water nymphs. By and large, the humans and the magical beings pretended not to notice each other.

Visitors to that part of the world were rare, and so when one evening when the fisherman saw the silhouette of a knight on horseback, he called to his wife to get ready to receive an guest. She prepared a tray with little glasses of spirit and a bowl of berries from the wood.

The fisherman called out, “Greetings Sir Knight, pay us the honour of a visit to our humble cottage.”

The knight was glad to find a roof where he might find food and shelter and he rode towards the fisherman’s home. By the time he reached it, the sky was already growing quite dark. The fisherman invited him to come inside. The knight sat in an armchair and put his leg up on a stool, for he had strained it. They could see that he was quite young, and good looking, if somewhat tired from his journey. He told them that his name was Sir Huldbrand, and that he had a castle that stood on the banks of the River Danube. While they were speaking, they heard a strange watery sound splashing against the window pain. The old man knotted his brow and looked troubled.

“Is it raining?” Huldbrand asked.

“No,” said the old man, as he got up and went to the door. He opened it and called out, “Undine, will you never stop playing these foolish tricks? We have a visitor.”

A few moments later, a girl’s voice said something like, “Don’t be so serious, father.” Huldbrand turned his head and saw a young woman of about eighteen years old stepping into the cottage. He had not expected to find anyone like her here. She was fair and very beautiful.

“And who’s this?” She said with a shrug and a little point at the knight. Her manner was quite insolent, but not without charm.

“Show more respect for our guest,” chided the fisherman’s wife, who was presumably also the girl’s mother.

“Does he talk?” Asked Undine, ignoring her parents discomfort.

“Forgive me,” said the knight. “I hurt my leg when I fell from my horse in the forest, and I am a little slow.” He clambered to his feet and gave a little bow to the girl.

She smiled ironically and said, “A proper knight, I see. And does he have a castle?”

“Undine, don’t be so rude!” Said her father.

Suddenly her eyes flashed with temper. “Well be like that then,” she said, and turning promptly around she headed back through the door into the night. They could hear her running down the path.

“Fiery!” Said the knight, almost approvingly. It was hard to tell if he was more astonished, or amused by her strange behaviour.

“She has always been one like that, ever since the day we found her,” said the mother.

“Found her?” Asked Huldbrand. “So she is not your daughter?”

“Not ours,” said the fisherman. “It is a strange story. Around fifteen years ago, I was returning from the market and making my way through the woods. As I was nearing home, I saw my wife running towards me. I knew something was up, because she never ventures into the woods normally.

“She’s gone, she’s gone,” she was crying. I knew right away that she could only mean our darling child, our little daughter. In fact, that very day she had just turned three years old, and I had a present for her in my sack. She had wondered out of the cottage, and all that was left of her was a blue cap floating on the water of the lake. She must have drowned. Perhaps a nymph pulled her under and took her for a sister in her watery kingdom.”

“We slept little that night, but in the morning we found, in the cot where our daughter normally slept, a little girl – but she was not ours. She was fair where our daughter was dark. She was Undine whom you have just seen, albeit briefly. Her hair and her clothes were wet. We assumed she had fallen in the lake. Of course we accepted the child as a gift from god. Although she has always been naughty, wilful, and strong-headed, we have always loved her like the daughter we lost.”

The knight was clearly fascinated by the tale. “Indeed what a strange story,” he said. “I hope she shall return because I would like to see more of this mysterious and beautiful creature.”

Just then, the wind howled through the trees, and rain began to beat down on the roof of the cottage.

“A storm!” Exclaimed the knight. “We cannot let her stay out in such terrible weather,” and pulling his cloak over his head, he too went through the door of the cottage, and disappeared into the darkness.

The knight hobbled on his strained leg as fast as he could manage. He followed the path towards the haunted wood, as something told him that she had headed that way. He soon found that a stream was now gushing across the path. He was about to step into the torrent, when voice called out, “Do not step into the stream, it is full of mischief.” He looked up the hill, and could just make out that Undine was sitting on a little island in the middle of the stream. She was sheltered from the storm by the branches of a giant oak tree. The knight scrambled up the hill, and held out his hand to help her jump across onto the bank. “We must return home, your gentle and kind step parents are worried about you,” he said, spreading his cloak above their heads to protect them from the rain.

“I will do as you say,” she replied, “if you promise to tell me the story of your journey through the haunted wood.”

“I shall indeed,” said the knight, “It’s a strange story, though perhaps not by your standards, now hurry.” And they rushed as fast as they could, back to the cottage.

Later, as they dried out before the fire, the knight told Undine and her parents the strange story of how he came through the woods.

“A week ago, in the city on the other side of the woods, there was a holiday and a tournament. I took part in the jousting. Amongst the onlookers I saw a face that I liked. She was a maiden; dark, and beautiful.

I rode up and asked her for her favour. She told me, “This sport is for boys. If you wish to win my favour, you must ride through the woods to the lake on the other side, and report back to me with news of whatever or whoever you find there.”

 

I knew, of course, that the woods were supposed to be haunted, but I do not fear spectres or magical creatures. The next day I set out on my quest, and indeed I found a nest of goblins living in the trunk of a great tree. They were far more afraid of me than I was of their ugly green faces and pointed ears. I rode on. But then, towards night, I felt a chill on my back. I looked around and saw strange white figure running towards me. My horse took fright and reared. I tried to reign him in, but I fell from my saddle. That was how I hurt my leg. The strange figure had vanished. I felt unwell, and quite chilled to the bones, but I managed to gather my horse and ride on. Eventually I came out of the other side and saw the calm blue waters of the lake. That was when I knew I was near the end of my quest. I heard your kind voice offering me hospitality, and here I am. Do you find my story strange?”

“No,” said the girl. “The white man was Kühleborn. He is a demon of the lake and the forest, and he was up to his usual tricks. I am glad you were not hurt more badly when you fell from your horse.”   

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The next part continues on with the the 2nd part of the series.  The story came from: www.storynory.com/2013/06/06/u…

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Comments: 7

Greybeard-CG [2018-01-22 21:47:22 +0000 UTC]

Quite like the silhouette-illustrations Nick Sometimes simplicity is enough.

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Nuwer-Arts In reply to Greybeard-CG [2018-01-26 02:54:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks  ^^  

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CherokeeGal1975 [2018-01-21 17:09:49 +0000 UTC]

I'm saving this in my messages so I can read it later.  I like the way you write. 

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Nuwer-Arts In reply to CherokeeGal1975 [2018-01-21 18:24:45 +0000 UTC]

Lol. I didn't write this. I'll have to add the link I copied the text from

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CherokeeGal1975 In reply to Nuwer-Arts [2018-01-21 18:34:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh.  Well, I have read some of your work and I did like it.  And I just read that story.  So far it's pretty good.  Like the drawing too.

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Nuwer-Arts In reply to CherokeeGal1975 [2018-01-26 03:31:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks  ^^  Yeah, its been a while since I last tried writing

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CherokeeGal1975 In reply to Nuwer-Arts [2018-01-26 03:43:36 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.  It often takes me a long time to come up with another story too.  But there's no deadlines, so no need to rush anything.

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