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Published: 2014-09-07 13:32:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 9610; Favourites: 304; Downloads: 0
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Okay, so I would just like to say that you are definitely one of the best anime/manga artists I know of.
The one thing that really sticks out to me is the stripes in the jacket. The stripes almost feel like they were added quickly, like an overlay. In the larger wrinkles where the fabric almost curves "up" the lines look like they cut right through, taking away a bit of the effect. With this said, I might be a bit picky knowing your how stylized your artwork is, but yeah. The was the only big thing that stuck out to me.
I must compliment the way you made the hair. It's SO well done. It's a nice wave, and I can image it having a little bounce and personality when the character walks.
Overall: Great job. I can't wait to see what you make next. <3
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thankyou!! I will take my time more with the stripes and accessories ^-^
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Ahh kat! You keep on impressing me!! stap it! >w< I was soo exited when I got this! I love the shading, the braids, the folds of the clothes! The little lips are adorable ; w; The eyes are just what I was expecting on both commissions! and the little bow is sooo cute ; w;;; Thank you soo soo much for these commissions I am so happy and grateful that i got them!! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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thankyou for everything and commissioning me!!
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thank YOU for everything!! i'm so exited to play with you!!
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So this was difficult to critique because it was difficult seeing what could be improve and what not, for me because the rest of the body isn't visible >w< But I will try
Vision: The colors are vibrant like always, and very soft. The lines in the bow and clothing make it less bland to look at, so it catches your attention. The hair is again well drawn with such a nice style, and actually looks like how real hair would act in this sense. Something that caught me was the neck going into the body, something I don't really know what seems off, it could be me however. Also on the right shoulder there is a line that pokes out a bit, but not too noticeable. 4.5/5 c:
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Originality: First time seeing this, other than the chibi version so yes original, it is also a commission so it is a original piece of work. Not much to say because it is basically completely original as I have not seen this commission before. 4.5/5 c:
Technique: The technique, is beautiful. The shading on the clothe bends and hair is beautiful, and the glossy feel on the image itself brings its vibrancy and softness. The skin tone blending with the rest of the body looks really soft ( Ν‘Β° ΝΚ Ν‘Β°)β And the beads on the necklace have the shiny reflection jewelry should have. I'm taking it the lighting is coming from the front, so the shading is well accurate as the shading on the image don't seem random and look well in place. 5/5 -w-b
Impact: The impact, the softness makes it very stylish and cute, and the accessories look very real. The necklace has the string that reflect a bit of the gems colors, and from certain angles would be invisible (Taking that it is transparent) and the bow in her hair actually looks poofy and soft. The extra strands of hair sticking out make it very hair-like (For a lack of a better word) and your gravity has very much improved compared to some previous works, although not much movement so there isn't anything to critique about that. Her eyebrows give her a sense of innocence, and overall, it is just amazing.
Overall: Your art has again improved from previous works (Improves each time ;3e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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thankyou very much for putting in the time into writing this!! I've taken note of everything and will do my best to improve!! thankyou again ^-^Β
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Love it! I love the change of expression, super moe! Rather than a typical just smiley face. It gives it more character. The shading is simple but very nice. I love the way the backround color reflects with the shiny colors on the hair. The skin is porcelain and beautiful! The braids are also super cute >w< The expression is my favorite part of the drawing by far though e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Okay this one is just plain GORGEOUS!!! Tbh u could make anime books for a living! I had to scroll over the pic again to pick out something! What I noticed is that her chest seems a little bit flat, and I mean like, paper kinda! Her mouth is, like the rest of it, super kawaii, but makes it seem as though she's scared of something or someone! Maybe she's just nervous cuz everyone is looking at her and judging her..... I absolutely LOVE the detail in her clothes and hair! Her pupils look a little bit small though, which tends to be quite creepy. But the rest just makes it all look so kawaii! Again, another amazing piece of work! I'm obsessed with your work and it is amazing! You probably know know I'm a fan from my profile pic! Anyways, try to make them chest not as flat next time and work on making the pupils a bit bigger!
<3
-Pixel Kitty!
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thankyou!! I'll work on making the pupils bigger and to make her chest look more like a chest and not like paper!! ^-^
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Ok so this piece is super cute and all but there is one thing that sticks out to me as weird. The braids going back look a bit block like and don't look as flowly as the rest of the hair. The way you made her lips are just super cute! I think the bow looks a lot better on this one because it fits with the pose! The coat is still and will always be super cute. I think you did a very good job on the necklace and I don't think you do them very often as from what I see. Anyway great job on this and continue to keep up the good work!
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thankyou!! I agree I need to work on braids!! ; w;
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i love this, but i'm not really sure where her hair is going, seeing as it stops abruptly at her shoulders then continues to flow further down.
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look at her journal entries, they have all the info there =^β’^=
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oh how i wish i could draw like you kat XvXΒ
plz do a tutorial on drawing anatomy and such! cuz im good at the face but not really on the body :I
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;A; suuuuupppppppeeeeerrrrrrrr kawaii!!!!!!!!!
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how much do they cost o.o
i probably can't afford one, but yolo
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* u * Β
Had to see it again...I just had to.
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KAWAIIII~!!!! ;7; ashshdgsjdksna >vπ: 0 β©: 0
*wheezes and touches screen*
what is this beauty
what
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Kyaaaaa so cute~!
You did it again, Nyan! Great job!
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