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Nyla-Silverlyth — TGB- Stranger in the Dark

Published: 2011-09-04 00:30:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 832; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Description The forest at night is not quiet. The whirr of insects, the rustle of hidden creatures. Peaceful, but not quiet. Lonesome, but not alone.

The rhythmic padding of paws, nearly undetectable to untrained ears. Step. Step. Step. The rustle of fur, changing direction, repeating the process. Eyes in the darkness. Two gold, two mismatched. A silent pair, protecting their tribe from danger.

Something moves in the darkness, far too large to be harmless prey. A glance exchanged, unspoken words, and the mismatched eyes turn to the darkness of the forest. Wait here. The younger takes up position before the entrance, gold eyes watching the dark tip of a tail blend into shadow.

He waits.

How long has it been? Should he worry yet?

No. Best to wait.

There, in the distance, was that a cry? His paranoid mind must playing tricks on him. Should he investigate anyway? Could be a trap. Is it worth the risk?

He waits. But not for very long.

The warriors sleeping just inside the entrance will wake if anyone passes them, and they know a tribe-mate from a foe. He follows the trail of the older Guard, his pawsteps light, eyes and ears alert.

The smell of blood is the first thing he notices. Overpowering, blocking out even the scent trail. Not that he needs it anymore. But who's blood is it? A question soon answered, as the trees open up to reveal two figures, one familiar, one oddly misshapen. And blood. A disturbing amount.

The forest is silent. The two standing figures contemplate each other. The stranger blinks a single eye that glints through tears, internal pain showing clearly.

"Why...?" A query that breaks the silence, left unanswered as the stranger turns, fleeing into the dark forest. Confusion and shock mingle in the air as the gold-eyed one hesitates, unsure. Should he give chase? A wet, choking sound is the answer to this question. He turns his attention to the fallen Guard, who's chest heaves, trying to breathe, but inhaling only blood. Drowning on his own life.

Swallowing back bile, the younger cat crouches down, trying to see the extent of the damage without drawing too close. He knows instinctively without looking, this is a fatal wound. Still, is there no way to help?

The words of a healer come to mind. 'Sometimes... there's nothing you can do...'

A memory warped by the moment's pain and shock. He knows what it means, but now all he can do is wonder...

"Only sometimes?"


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Comments: 16

Treestorm [2011-09-26 01:39:15 +0000 UTC]

this is great you really are good at drawing and story telling oUo i cant wait to see what happens next

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BrisaHelada [2011-09-04 13:42:40 +0000 UTC]

Both picture and story are awesome! you managed to capture the darkness >:3

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Nyla-Silverlyth In reply to BrisaHelada [2011-09-04 17:54:34 +0000 UTC]

Well, he is in SHADOW-tribe... XD *Brick'd* Thank you very much, though!

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BrisaHelada In reply to Nyla-Silverlyth [2011-09-06 22:11:22 +0000 UTC]

Yeahh XD
No problem

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Toadfoal [2011-09-04 04:24:26 +0000 UTC]

Clever! I like the writing you added as well. This stuff is deep. ouo

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Nyla-Silverlyth In reply to Toadfoal [2011-09-04 17:53:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, thank you, and thank you! :3 I love doing this sort of dark work, to be honest... XD

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GrimmKitty6-11 [2011-09-04 03:27:17 +0000 UTC]

Awesmazetastic *thumbs up* It looks great The story goes with it well too and both of my characters stayed very well in character ^^ Wonderful work <3

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Nyla-Silverlyth In reply to GrimmKitty6-11 [2011-09-04 17:52:53 +0000 UTC]

Well, neither of them even talked, like I was intending, so there's not much to base their being in-character off, but thank you anyway. XD I'm glad you like, it, I worked hard so I wouldn't disappoint you. <3

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GrimmKitty6-11 In reply to Nyla-Silverlyth [2011-09-04 18:11:35 +0000 UTC]

You have successfully not disappointed me <3

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Nyla-Silverlyth In reply to GrimmKitty6-11 [2011-09-04 21:01:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, that's good to hear~ ^^

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MissChry [2011-09-04 03:11:58 +0000 UTC]

Very dark piece. LOVE IT!

<3

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Nyla-Silverlyth In reply to MissChry [2011-09-04 17:51:28 +0000 UTC]

Why yes, I do love dark pieces too. XDDD Erm, I mean, thank you! :'D

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Yolly-anda [2011-09-04 01:06:31 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh dear goodnesss! I love this picture soooo very much! Very awesome! I love the fact that we can't see Stark's whole face and the blood if very dark wich brings in the atmosphere soo well! Soo awesome! I love it! Is this your shadow kitty? legasp! he saw!!!

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Nyla-Silverlyth In reply to Yolly-anda [2011-09-04 01:14:49 +0000 UTC]

Uh... Thank you so much! *Not sure how to respond to all the words XD* Yus, Orro saw! He saw... And he did nothing.

Damn he feels guilty :c

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Yolly-anda In reply to Nyla-Silverlyth [2011-09-04 02:45:12 +0000 UTC]

Aww Poor Orro ;3;

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Nyla-Silverlyth In reply to Yolly-anda [2011-09-04 17:43:38 +0000 UTC]

I love abusing my characters. <3

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