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Objurgo-Sol β Honda Rikigayu. Kyoukai senjou no Horizon OC/FA
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Published: 2013-07-25 15:07:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 890; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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This is a character I based off of Kyoukai senjou no Horizon. I just made someone like a cousin to the Honda family. I had a lot of fun playing with different shading techniques for the skin tight clothing.Related content
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Thank you, have you watched the show? I think all the character designs are pretty awesome
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You're very welcome 
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Hi! I'm here to give you some constructive criticism.Β
Overall, It's a really good artwork, but there are things you can fix to make it even better.Β
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- Her waist is far too thin for her body, her upper body wouldn't be able to hold her up, even in an anime. It might help to look into some anatomy tutorials to make it look more realistic, the same with her arms. Compared to her legs, it looks like her arms didn't develop properly. Try making them a bit longer to match her body.Β
- Her mouth could use a little more definition. I don't think there is anything wrong with it, I just can't see it without zooming in.Β
- Her boobs look like they're being pressed against her, next time, try making them jut out a bit further, like I said before, anatomy tutorials will help with this.Β
Please don't feel like I'm telling you that this is a bad artwork, I'm just trying to help you so you can be the best you can be! 
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Thanks for the feedback
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No Problem! It's good that you figured out what you did wrong, even if it you couldn't fix it until later!
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