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Very cool looking guy! I like how you did the shading, especially over his right eye. The features on his face are distinct as well. However, the proportions need work. His hand is as big as his head, making his head look small in comparison. The presentation could also be improved. The shadow of your arm also distracts the viewer from seeing the full image, and cropping out everything except the sketchbook would also help. If you donβt have a scanner, there are lots of scanner apps for smartphones you can get. Even lighting and cropping would help a lot in the presentation. Hope this helps!Β
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