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Published: 2003-06-12 23:00:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 2055; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 1118
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Description An improved version of "beach2". The original shoreline was an especially quickie job, so here's a much better one. Now I'll be submitting this do DA prints.. now THERE'S a poster.

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"Since I've been so good, can I.. do something?"

Alisia's eyes widened with fear. She didn't speak, not knowing how to say "Oh god, please no, just leave me alone!" without sounding hurtful. Regan got closer, and put an arm over Alisia, snuggling up close.

Alisia's body was rigid with tension. Was that it? Could be worse. Regan felt the tension, and was already ashamed. No, not ashamed. It's just that it was painful to think that her touch would bring such displeasure.

-Excerpt from "Legacies of Autar", unfinished
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Comments: 13

GreenStarCandy [2004-09-01 03:10:56 +0000 UTC]

My GF sent me the link to this because she loved it. and so do i

*wishes she had a credit card to order it* lol it would do well above my bed

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obsidianzero In reply to GreenStarCandy [2004-09-01 18:53:37 +0000 UTC]

hehe, cool, thanks. I kinda miss those two.. after i finished writing thier story, i ran out of excuses to draw them.. I have a story half done where they make a cameo, and it was so fun writing for them again.

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bitwize [2003-09-23 07:56:42 +0000 UTC]

The one on the right reminds me of my ex. She had blonde hair and a soft, round body like that which was thrilling to hold.

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tuutti [2003-08-15 16:54:53 +0000 UTC]

very awesome, that water is very cool looking.
good job!

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moogstruck [2003-07-24 18:41:10 +0000 UTC]

wow, nice job. i love the softness of the two girlies.

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kaujot [2003-06-21 23:52:19 +0000 UTC]

Wow, those are big knockers.

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masamuna [2003-06-15 05:17:39 +0000 UTC]

A shadow under the blanket will bring the pic together. Good job on the shadows, and I personally like the eyes.

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dbug [2003-06-13 18:54:24 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm not sure that I like the whole idea, but at least I appreciate the quality in the making

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obsidianzero [2003-06-13 17:23:43 +0000 UTC]

"if you wanted to keep it 2d looking it's fine...the eyes are a bit exaggerated though...and I'm not sure the posture for the girl in the red suit is completely believeable...both of them seem a bit . . . "unrealistic" I mean removed..."

eh? Well, if thier poses aren't totally natural, that really goes into the story behind them, and how they feel (or in alisia's case, DON'T feel) about each other... exaggerated eyes? well, that's anime for ya!

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maria-theresa [2003-06-13 15:34:27 +0000 UTC]

could you make it 1280x1024 ??? please!
Would like to have it on my desktop....

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maria-theresa [2003-06-13 15:32:22 +0000 UTC]

would buy it if:
I was a man
had some more money....

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lonelydreamer [2003-06-13 04:47:28 +0000 UTC]

it's smooth and rounded definately.

if you wanted to keep it 2d looking it's fine...the eyes are a bit exaggerated though...and I'm not sure the posture for the girl in the red suit is completely believeable...both of them seem a bit . . . "unrealistic" I mean removed...

I like the shading though, and the expressions on their faces...

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rayne-gallows [2003-06-12 23:08:55 +0000 UTC]

the water, shading and overall image are really well done. The sand seems alittle coarse, but otherwise it's really good :}

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