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Published: 2009-05-14 00:52:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 856; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 1
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Description They handed me a crayon.

They handed me paper.

I scribbled.

There wasn’t much I was good for, really. I am small, tiny, insignificant in the big plan of the universe. There are no mirrors where they keep me, just white walls and paper.

I’m not like them, not big or strong. I have to keep silent. The only power I have is in my mind, and I will use it when I need to.

The man leans over me, smelling deeply of pollen and flowers that burn your nose, and says something. I don’t listen. I just want to stab him with the crayon I’m using.

They’re fighting again. Calm words, yes, but the meaning is there. Acid tones and bitter thoughts make the air metallic.

I sit. I draw.

I don’t know their names. I call them by what I see. Flowers. Ice. Fire. Lighting.

Fire sometimes looks at me with pity, but it never says a word. I sit. I draw. I think.

I will be free, one day. I just need to know how.
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Comments: 21

sleepyrie [2012-06-03 08:31:58 +0000 UTC]

Love it!

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Kit-Kat-Tik-Tak [2010-12-24 00:59:04 +0000 UTC]

Flower Nazi?
I never knew flowers could be Nazis
I was aware of gym teachers being them but flowers never crossed my mind. I'm going to be more cautious now
BTW it. was. beautiful
*sniffs and kicks flower Nazi in the bawls*

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OceanFae In reply to Kit-Kat-Tik-Tak [2010-12-25 03:45:01 +0000 UTC]

LOL, thank you so much!

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Kit-Kat-Tik-Tak In reply to OceanFae [2010-12-25 04:03:07 +0000 UTC]

You'r welcome!!

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UnknowKH2 [2009-06-30 05:50:07 +0000 UTC]

You could post this as a fanfic. You might want to add on. But I like this short and a lot of others would too.

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OceanFae In reply to UnknowKH2 [2009-06-30 19:21:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I was debating on putting it on ff.net, but I think I will now that I have some support...

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UnknowKH2 In reply to OceanFae [2009-06-30 23:42:48 +0000 UTC]

I'll read it again on FF.net

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OceanFae In reply to UnknowKH2 [2009-07-01 01:02:20 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks! I should put it up soon. I'm also working on another that I think many will enjoy, but its quite different than anything I've read. If I ever finish, I hope you'll read it!

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UnknowKH2 In reply to OceanFae [2009-07-01 03:03:57 +0000 UTC]

Just tell me when you post it on FF.net. I'm aswaxsora.

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OceanFae In reply to UnknowKH2 [2009-07-01 04:07:59 +0000 UTC]

Okay! I will! I'm the same name on ff.net.

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UnknowKH2 In reply to OceanFae [2009-07-02 21:11:42 +0000 UTC]

Okay. I'll add you.

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OceanFae In reply to UnknowKH2 [2009-07-02 21:12:49 +0000 UTC]

Okay!

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UnknowKH2 In reply to OceanFae [2009-07-02 21:17:24 +0000 UTC]

Done.

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fictionalboyfriend [2009-05-14 04:10:35 +0000 UTC]

I do like it, I do.
The bit about mirrors came out of left field, however.

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OceanFae In reply to fictionalboyfriend [2009-05-14 22:02:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh. She can never see herself, so she has no idea what she can do. Its a metaphor.

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fictionalboyfriend In reply to OceanFae [2009-05-16 02:04:31 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh, I GETS IT!
*feels clever*

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OceanFae In reply to fictionalboyfriend [2009-05-16 02:26:52 +0000 UTC]

YAAAAAAAY!

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Kira-Karix-chan [2009-05-14 02:04:53 +0000 UTC]

M...My eyes are tearing up. Seriously that's... deep. I'm sniffling. I haven't had a good dose of anything KH related in a long while, what with my TF obsession.

Thank you.

LOL FLOWER NAZI!

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OceanFae In reply to Kira-Karix-chan [2009-05-14 02:20:07 +0000 UTC]

I... I made someone tear up?

You dont know how much that is a complement to me.

Thank you.

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Kira-Karix-chan In reply to OceanFae [2009-05-14 21:06:54 +0000 UTC]

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OceanFae In reply to Kira-Karix-chan [2009-05-14 22:03:24 +0000 UTC]

LOL I KNOW!

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